In the human world, a zombie outbreak has spread faster than a wildfire in a dry forest and it's up to me, my close friends, and by a random fortunate chance, the mane six ponies. As the story progresses, we will learn more about the details on the infection and if the world can ever be saved.
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It's pretty good, but maybe you could explain why Twilight is there in the first place, and also, you have a lot of text walls. try adding more paragraphs. other then that, it's great!
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Yeah sorry about that... im stil new to FimFiction and all that. Also i planned the second chapter and have decided to explain that in the beginning of the 2nd chapter. This first one was to be an intro(also i had to put her there because it didnt have anough MLP substance in the first chapter to be approved the first time so i apologize for any plot hole there)
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no need to apoligize, the Twilight thing just seemed kind of random, haha. I'll be reading the next chapters you write :D
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Thanks!
i think this is good so far. clearly original if i might add
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Good story, and a good place to leave off for a second chapter. I'll definitely read it.