Buried alive. Left to rot. On the edge of his fate the detective is pulled from his coffin. The city that covered him is gone and the detective is worlds away. Magic, friendship, love, harmony, someone still has to put all the pieces together.
"I was asleep," I called back to her after she roughly touched back down a few feet away. "You must have been trying to do something... naughty to me," I accused.
Really a fantastic story so far. I'm very glad that I saw this a few days ago and decided to check it out. Val's a very nicely rounded character, and his love of cute things coupled with the wry wit ends up being a really charming combination. Looking forward to where you're going to head with this, as well as where the story threads you've strung along so far are going to lead to.
"Oh I'm so glad you've remembered what I told you about his human customs!" Celestia said with just utter delight dripping from her words.
Best wingpony. At least, when it comes to the quest for pony hugs.
"Do not be fooled Valentino, my sister can be very assertive. I worry what might happen when she grows accustomed to how well you are treating her," Celestia warned me, her tone starting quite serious before devolving into her usual playfulness.
Translation; Don't yank my sisters chain or I'll murder you.
"Um!" I heard her squeak, which cause me turn back to her again. She was looking fidgety. "It's just... P-Princess Celestia told me..." she stammered, losing steam very quickly.
Case and point. Celestia best wingpony.
Gonna be honest here, after a dream like the one he had regarding Twilight? I wouldn't be cuddling her to sleep. Both because of awkwardness and for fear of... resurgence.
Aww. That's so cute~
I'm loving this so far!
Nice, I really think we need some more of Valentino experiencing the world like celestia said. That's where this story is at its strongest.
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Now that cute.
HE LIVES!!!!
That was an adorable ending.
Seeing as the skeleton thing seems to be resolved, I get the feeling that the griffins are going to be a problem later.
Awww, he made a bunch of new pals on the train!
Ponies are always adorable.
> tfw you will never cuddle an adorable pone
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Shush. I already do. While she may not be the original Chrysalis, she's the best I could grow from the Technocyte.
^Think a word missing here
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Thank you! Has been fixed!
So many missing words in these chapters >.<. They bug me so!
Other than that though I'm really enjoying this story. I wish I had found it sooner!
~Have a good one.
Really a fantastic story so far. I'm very glad that I saw this a few days ago and decided to check it out. Val's a very nicely rounded character, and his love of cute things coupled with the wry wit ends up being a really charming combination. Looking forward to where you're going to head with this, as well as where the story threads you've strung along so far are going to lead to.
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Valentino always reminds me of Kaiki Deishuu from Monogatari series.
I always find Human in Equestria stories that feature the human becoming awkward friends with Luna very endearing.
For some reason I was reminded of Jarvis Cocker, I'm not really sure why.
Wonder if he's ever gonna share a bed with any other pony...
Best wingpony. At least, when it comes to the quest for pony hugs.
Translation; Don't yank my sisters chain or I'll murder you.
Case and point. Celestia best wingpony.
Gonna be honest here, after a dream like the one he had regarding Twilight? I wouldn't be cuddling her to sleep. Both because of awkwardness and for fear of... resurgence.