Buried alive. Left to rot. On the edge of his fate the detective is pulled from his coffin. The city that covered him is gone and the detective is worlds away. Magic, friendship, love, harmony, someone still has to put all the pieces together.
It actually Dash that's going to freak out isn't it? I mean while Valentino was buried alive and would have a well earned phobia the area they're in seems to be large enough if there is some distance between the two. Rainbow however has been trapped in a landslide and I can't imagine any kind of enclosed space is very appealing to a creature of flight.
You, my good sir, have written a good ff. The humour is fantastic, and not many can write a good Pinkie Pie, she is a difficult character after all, but in my humble opinion, you nailed her :) well done, good sir... well done!
Thanks for the update!
Hm...I shall watch this closely - I have high hopes.
I wonder how his magic will react to his stronger emotions.
Here comes the claustrophobia...
Um....This is good.
Hmmmm, now things are getting really interesting, loved btw how he casually talked about his sex Life with the ponys, that was hillarious.
Dun dun dun!
Best chapter yet! Great jokes and lots of story progress. Keep it up the best you can!
LMMFAO...
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It actually Dash that's going to freak out isn't it? I mean while Valentino was buried alive and would have a well earned phobia the area they're in seems to be large enough if there is some distance between the two. Rainbow however has been trapped in a landslide and I can't imagine any kind of enclosed space is very appealing to a creature of flight.
Calling it now this is a RD flag.
You, my good sir, have written a good ff. The humour is fantastic, and not many can write a good Pinkie Pie, she is a difficult character after all, but in my humble opinion, you nailed her :) well done, good sir... well done!
Guy I think you're missing the point, he's talking about sex.
5384293 I have to admit, with yor Profile pic, the sentence becomes much more funnier
It's a rare thing when my favorite character in a story is the main protagonist, but I really enjoy Val's humor. Especially when he teases the ponies