That was really good. There was enough backstory without detracting from the plot, it was very descriptive, I liked how the characters were portrayed, and the sexual content was very appealing. Great job.

Does Shaun Sinclair happen to be the brother of an author who is a pessimist and wrote a novel about the hard times of being an immigrant in the early 1900s, but everyone who read his novel only focused on the horrors of how he described the slaughter houses?

No one will ever get my blatant reference.

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I don't understand the reference.

Nice cover art.

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JESUS CHRIST

5076321 Lol this has been my avatar for the past couple of months. You have good taste.

5076197 I get it.

Spoilerey for answer

And I doubt there is any relation.

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The dude that commissioned me wanted the story based off the full picture, so it's Anon's taste not mine :P

Human x Pony. You know, all arguments about bestiality aside, just the general image of this happening is ridiculous.

But hey, to him his own. Now, if everyone thought that ponies were the size of cats like SS&E does, then we'd have an even worse mental image.

tfw the cover art is (probably)censored but I can fap to it anyways

Freakin HOT

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I guess it helps that they are intelligent and have faces and slightly different body structure.

This was the story i was waiting for

I like how the main character has the same name as me. :D

Deepthroat and anal? I know I can fap to this.
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5076197 Sinclairs The Jungle yes? Upton?

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You know in actuality ponies and horses CAN get burned by the sun. Some equines have lighter coat colors that allow the sun to get through and burn the soft flesh underneath.

i feel guilty for enjoying this very much

liking and faved

5076155 me and you should team up and find the 23 people who disliked this story...and MAKE them like it

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This is why I love my army

But I'm pretty sure that there's as many dislike because people don't like HiE clop.

5079103 good point

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I'm up for a little reaping.

5079103 5079250 I don't get what the big deal is about it. I know people say "Oh, it's bestiality" but it's kinda not, Are they animals? Yes, but they're also sentient and can resist advances from people unlike earth animals.

Triggers: deepthroat and anal.

...Those need a trigger warning now?

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People usually put triggers on stories so other people that don't like those kinds of things can avoid them.

5079981 Not to mention how many dumbasses would go, "OMG DIS IZ DISGUSTING Y WUD U RITE THIS STUFF U FAGGIT THATS GROSS PUT UP SUM KIND OF WARNING FAGGIT"

5076309 As soon as I saw this in the feature box I knew you'd be on it like a hobo on a ham sandwich!

5079324
Definition of Animal:
a living organism that feeds on organic matter, typically having specialized sense organs and nervous system and able to respond rapidly to stimuli.

So, they are in fact animals, just as humans are. I think you mean: are they beasts. Under the very archaic idea, a beast is an animal that isn't human. In which case, yes. But these days beasts are animals lacking in sapience. In which case, no, these theoretical ponies are not beasts as they are in fact sapient.

The whole "eeew, but they're animals" is just people having a knee jerk reaction without bothering to invest thought into the matter. It only came up like this for us since we're the only sapient species in our world. Understandable but entirely misplaced when considering theoretical settings and beings.

5079324 Disliking this story?
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And it would seem that there are more than 23 heretics now.

See I want to PM you to see the whole picture but I'm so conflicted right now I don't know if I can.

5080778 I meant what you said, but you said it far more eloquently and intelligently than I.

well...it was so good that even know I had to read bits and peaces of it throughout the day(dont ask me why I read stuff like this during school.) and my computer got turned off like 50 times and I had to re-lode the page and find my spot every time that I can still say this was an enjoyable peace of art literature.

That is all.

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Best.
Video comment.
EVER!

5082707 what you do is right click the image. click 'search google for this image'. Job done.

Works on chrome. Never tried with others. I've done this tons throughout the past few years since i figured it out.

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I couldn't find it!

5091084 it's the tenth option down. Another thing you can do is drag the image to your desktop, go to google, go to image search, and drag the image into the search bar.

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There's only six options on my google. SCREW YOU GOOGLE!

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Oh wait now there's 24. NEVEMIND!

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Now theres 6 screw google. I'm done.

5091467 them first world problems.

5078044 That is the most amazing .gif I have ever seen. I will never be able to watch A Goofy Movie the same way again, and I fucking love that movie.

That was awesome.

Pounding Twilight's plot, ahhh yeah.

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cool a very cool story

Wait, he's "billions and billions" of lightyears from Earth? That's well beyond the observable limits of the universe. There's no way astronomers should have been able to detect Equestria, much less send a ship there.

In short, your fic fails science. But that's not the point, is it?

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...no

very fun story to read
oh...and sexy twilight bein hammered is also nice lol

Is there any possibility of this being turned into a full story instead of just a one-shot?