Celestia feels like she is no longer of any use to Equestria. Can she be dissuaded? If so, who would even have the chance?
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2006midnight
I am a girl who got into My Little Pony Friendship is Magic 7 years ago. And I've finally decided to try and write fanfics, so...yeah. That's about it. If you ever want to talk feel free to PM me.
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What a good sister... beautiful, as always.
I don't think the conversation between Luna and Celestia was well handled. Celestia's description of the nightmare was like an emotionless list of events, while Luna's reply can be summed up as "but I wouldn't do that", as though that affirmation was all that was needed to dispel the dream's intensity. Most nightmare's aren't rational, but acknowledging that doesn't reduce the impact at all. The internal conflict that was the cause of the nightmare isn't addressed at all--Celestia's feelings of inferiority and uselessness (speaking of which, the story doesn't match up to the description very well. Equestria is hardly mentioned at all, with the bulk of the story oriented around her feelings about Luna).
5190877 Thank you
5191093 I see what you mean and I'm sorry that this story doesn't really work the way it should.
Good story, I like it. Hope to see more of your work my friend
5191714 Thank you, I have 17 more to write before the 31st so you'll have a lot of opportunities.
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(Like most one-shots, I find; the few exceptions I've discovered hold prominent places in my Favorites list.)
5191776
This does need a bit of work, but it's a good start!
5191995 Yeah, that's what happens when you're trying to write 19 stories in 5 days
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5192023 I'm way behind in One-shotober and I'm still going to try to finish.
Lovely.
5192247 Thank you
5192321
You're welcome.
5191776 don't push yourself if you don't have to.
5192758 I said I was going to complete One-shotober so I do have to.
5192956 Don't force yourself. Because if you can't handle all those stories all month than take breaks.
5193117 I would've done it if I hadn't let all of the stupid shit going on in my life prevent me from writing. Writing is kind of an outlet for emotions anyway, so I'm going to do the best I can to get them all finished.
5193121
I don't mean to horn in on your conversation, but forcing yourself to write something just because you said you were going to is absolutely the worst motivator possible. No one's going to lynch you if you don't complete all thirty-one stories, and no one's going to be disappointed in you.
5193514 That's usually how I work though. And really, I hate myself enough right now, that I would be way more disappointed in myself than usual if I didn't finish them.
5193523
Don't be. Just take a step back and enjoy all that you've accomplished so far.
5193549 I can't not expect myself to finish them though. That's just how I've always been.
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But you should only do it because you want to.
5193579 Can't I want to not hate myself more than I do?
5193582
You shouldn't hate yourself at all.
5193589 But I always have
5193594
Then, stop. And start loving yourself.
5193607 But I can't. I don't know how.
5193613
There's a website for everything.
It's kind of a simplistic overview, but it's probably better than the dumb stuff I say.
5193622
There really is a website for everything. And I'm sure you wouldn't say dumb things.
5193629
Not intentionally, no, but I have the vague, uneasy feeling that what I want to say and how it eventually translates into speech/words are two separate things.
5193638 Heh, alright then.
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But enough about me. Let's talk about me.
5193647 Uh.........
5193689
Joke. It's a quote from Johnny Bravo.
5193724 Never heard of it
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It was the 90's. Crazy times.
5193809 Indeed
this is a nice look into Celestia's heart
I would say that it should be longer as it feels rushed. I'l love it if you turned it into something longer so that Celestia could delve deeper into her regrets/fears/etc
still giving it a thumbs up and fav
5194462 I was a little bit out of my element with this one, so I can see why you would say that. But thank you