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I am a girl who got into My Little Pony Friendship is Magic 4 years ago. And I've finally decided to try and write fanfics, so...yeah. That's about it. If you ever want to talk feel free to PM me.

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A night before the day she transforms into Nightmare Moon, Princess Luna thinks about what has led up to this point and of what the consequences will be. Inspired by the Silly Filly Studios fan animation, The Fall of the Crystal Empire.

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Comments ( 35 )

that was some deep stuff there...Great job!:twilightsmile: i enjoyed that very much!

4690109 Thank you so much! :pinkiehappy:

...Not fair you almost had me in tears! Please do a follow up from when Luna comes back home!!!:twilightsmile: So wonderful!

4690157 Huh, that's actually a really good idea. *dashes over to computer* Sequel now in progress! :raritywink:

4690270 :rainbowlaugh: Wow, I had no idea it was that good!

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Speaking as a veteran writer it's a incredible work for your first story ^^ Keep it up you'll go far!

4690326 Thank you! That really means a lot!

That was cool. Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

4695757 Thanks! I've got two sequels planned so I hope they'll continue to be as good as this one. :twilightsmile:

Interesting, I would like to see more of this.

4698275 Thanks! I'm working on two sequels so you definitely will.:twilightsmile:

that.
was.
AMAZING! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiegasp: :rainbowkiss: :raritystarry: :derpyderp1:
more luna/nightmare moon fics please

4702879 Thank you so much!!:pinkiehappy: I've got two sequels in the works so you'll definitely see more. :raritywink:

4704377 I take it you liked it then?

4704420
Yep. And the :yay: was when you said that you have two sequels in the works. :twilightsmile:

4704450 Yeah, the first one is almost halfway finished so hopefully I can submit it before the weekend. :twilightsheepish:

That was really good...
I almost shed a tear at the gravestone part...

4727038 Thanks! And thanks for faving it as well! :twilightsmile:

4727045
No problem, you earned it with this story.:eeyup:

4727064 You're going to make me blush. :twilightblush:

Reading this while listening to daughter of the moon makes me have feelsssssssssssssss
:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::applecry::applecry::pinkiesad2::raritydespair:

4744450 Oh, yeah I can see how that would be a tear-jerking combination. :twilightblush:

Nicely done. :pinkiesmile:

This was very well done. I always enjoy a look into Luna's mind before her turn. The anger, frustration, but mostly the sadness. Well done.

4962477 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiesmile:

Awesome!

Interesting -- the first FIM story you completed was about Princess Luna, and so was mine -- "A Meeting by Moonlight." Yours was about Luna losing her way and much of her hope; mine was about her rediscovering hopes she had imagined long-lost.

I like the way in which Luna feels compelled to turn on her sister, while at the same time regretting her own desires. You've very effectively conveyed how it feels to turn on one's own -- her hatred is far from absolute. She still loves her sister. And, of course, Celestia never stopped loving her -- Celestia just became blinded by the approval of others to her sister's growing anger, despair and madness.

I strongly suspect you've heard Lullaby for a Princess, which was one of my own main inspirations for Nightmares Are Tragic, the other being the [url=http:www.fimfiction.net/group/1361/pony-pov-series-recursive-fanworks-collection]Pony POVerse of Alex Warlorn.

Of course, she hasn't yet summoned the Nightmare. The flashback to the Sisters' battle in Princess Twilight Sparkle makes it very obvious that Luna was overwhelmed by what she summoned. What she became as Nightmare Moon was far darker than even the rebellious Princess Luna had ever been.

The gravestone is a perfect final touch.

I can tell you really like Princess Luna. She's one of my own favorite characters too. And, of course, one of Princess Celestia's.

5453387 Thanks...I'll definitely read your stories when I get the chance...

5453387 Can you check to see if you blocked me? I can't PM you or comment on your page....

5484639

Ah, the reverse problem. I do not think I blocked you. Let me see if I can PM you ...

5484786 I'm certain you blocked me....that's the only explanation as to why you're the only person who's PMs I can't reply to....I saw the message you just sent, but I can't reply...

5484795

How do I block someone? If you point me to the menu I can see if you're blocked.

5484801 :facehoof: Go to the PM you just sent me, click on it, and when the chain of messages is displayed, underneath the place where it says "Inbox/ [no subject]" there are two buttons, if the one on the far left says unblock then click it

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