"The Sisterhooves Social!" Apple Bloom jumped up. "Applejack an' I do it every year! You an' Rarity can compete against other sister teams in all these neat events!"
Sweetie Belle grinned wide. "That sounds like the perfect way for us to hang out! Rarity will think it's an excellent idea."
* * *
Rarity held a hoof up to her chest. "What a ri—" She looked down at the face Sweetie Belle was making. Their sisterly relationship had been more than a little strained lately. It was time to make up for it, to do something to salvage it. "...riveting idea, Sweetie Belle."
"Really?" She squeaked. "You want to do it?"
Rarity winced. "Of course."
* * *
The two of them panted together at the finish line, exhausted.
"Wow... Rarity." Sweetie Belle took a deep breath. "You really did it. You really do care about me!"
Rarity smiled, looking down at herself. "And I didn't even have to get too dirty." Standing up, she shuddered at the thought of how sweaty she'd gotten. "Still... I think a visit to the spa is in order."
"Aww!"
Twilight Sparkle stepped up to them, cutting Sweetie Belle's protest short. "Come on now, Sweetie Belle. Your sister did something you like, so you can go with her and do something she likes. Isn't that fair?"
Sweetie Belle shrugged. "Yeah. I guess so."
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Having now read through the chapters so far, yeah that makes sense. God, I feel like a jerk for that last comment. I'm sorry. I just genuinely wasn't sure.
Also, this:
Pfft...
What the... Twilight, where'd you come from?!
"Blame my parents."
Hey that one guy hasnt posted Ultra Fast Pony yet! I may have to resort to going to youtube to watch it!
Dammit, Twilight is always stealing Rarity's screen time. And Sweetie Belle is so freaking cute. And metal.
KBO.
that was random. will be stalking.
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Of course!
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Doesn't everybody?
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No need to be so harsh on yourself.
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Heh, glad I can exceed expectations!
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I do enjoy making people laugh!
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Heh, good to see you're here, too. ^.^
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Good thing updates are daily! ^.^
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Fair enough.
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Of course!
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... Sure. Sure I have.
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Pretty much!
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She's everywhere. All the time.
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I may have skipped ahead and watched them all already.
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I do my best! ^.^
Ya know. These are short. REAAAAAAALY short. Short enough that you could probably fit half of each season in one chapter each. I'm almost surprised they let you publish the fic considering how few total words there are. Guess that's why so many chapters had to be published at once.
I get that you're not particularly putting a large amount of effort into these silly little one shots, but I still feel like something's missing. I guess i'm just used to fics with more meat on them.
I'm particularly interested to see the effects on the canon as a whole that the OP characters cause. It's improbable to think that there would be no real effects on the greater world as well as the characters themselves. Otherwise, what's the point of making them OP if there's no long term side effects? Makes for a funny fic in the moment, but boring in the long run. Predictable plots, no matter how funny at the time, lose their charm. It's why so many people groan when you can see a over used plot device coming into play.
I guess what's missing is variety, and a little depth.
please don't hate me5324212
Heh, I know. ^.^
Please don't judge my other stories based on this -- this I just write out of boredom occasionally. It's totally throw-away.
Saw this coming...
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Heh, the next one's probably pretty obvious, too.
And Rarity once again looked fresh after a day at the spa.
That is fair.