Derpy, on her normal delivery route, notices that a Zebra running across town has dropped a piece of paper. After returning it, the two talk, and soon become great friends...and more.
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The hints are over 9000- wait no there's not even 10.
Herd discussions? Oh I wonder who it could ever possibly be!
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No hints!
nice
stay classy
I'm calling Lyra and/or Bonbon
Kappa
Wait, that doesn't work here!?
Keepo
.... Sad face
5461675 Sadly, no to both of them.
And nope, twitch emoticons don't work here, which is real sad.
5462403 Yeah was pretty much joking around for that whole comment, lovely story though!
I see that. Hiding in the texts their. Can't wait for the next update.
5466678 What? Hiding it the text where?
What're you talking about?
I have to say, I started to read this story just for...let´s be honest, just for the clop factor. But you´re turning this story in something more. I have some complains ´bout Rush being too, not sure wich word would be right (I´m not a native english speaker), he is a little too "fluuffy", maybe, too "kindy giant". I like the character, don´t get me wrong, but I did not like the fact that he cried in this chapter, for example. seemed a little too much.
In the other hand, I LOVE your vision of Derpy ! She is shy and insecure, but Rush´s love is helping her blossom. Very nice caracterization !
Keep going, and have my thumbs up !
5472267 It's nice to see a fellow Chase fan!
And about Rush: to him, trust is everything. In (my headcanon) Zebrica, there is next-to-no lying, and everyone is open with one another. He can't even believe that he had "tricked"(I guess) Derpy into doing that, he thought she would leave him because he had lied to her, in a way. And really, I do appreciate the comment. If you've got to complain about Rush, that means he's got believable flaws. Thanks!
~ TOOWC
Nice little puzzle in the author notes bolding the letter to spell rarity
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Old comment but good eye! I had to look very close to spot it.