Derpy, on her normal delivery route, notices that a Zebra running across town has dropped a piece of paper. After returning it, the two talk, and soon become great friends...and more.
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Remembuh, Ah love's me some constructive criticisms!
~TOOWC
It's a rather cute little story, can't wait for more.
i like it, still seems like the stories rushed abit
stay classy
Once again you did a good work, also have a nice day!!
I love it. But I need MOAR!!!
5299074 Well, that's good. But you must WAIT.
~ TOOWC
*looks through feed sees chapter* finally you took a long time sir hut you are forgiven
This story is amazing I'm happy you updated it can't wait for the next chapter
5298749
This has made me chuckle.
You have done well today.
5300554
Thanks!
Glad I made somebody happy.
~ TOOWC
5299026 I agree and the Orange being his fav flavor was kinda ridiculous but I could let that slide. Just slow down some mores bro.
- A Caring Fan
seems like dinky will learn about the birds and the ees
The best way I could explain the rushed feeling, is that both Rush and Derpy have probably nor had a normal relationship. But that's just me. Keep up the good work!
This shipping has my seal of approval.
Kinda rushed that ending there. Conversations that need separation mold into single paragraphs that get really confusing quickly. Can't figure out who's talking.
9098805
Yeah, I know this early stuff is pretty hard to get through.
Dude, You don't do that to a kid. Thats potentially devastating.
Monk
“They may have been a pair of idiots, but the true test of intelligence is how you stick the landing!” -The Dimensional Traveler