Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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To those who were the first to read, Gdocs dun' goofed and left out a paragraph in the import right before Fredrick tickled Luna's hooves. There's an odd length jump between two paragraphs where this motherfucker should've gone. I fixed it and when you finish, give it a refresh and find that lone paragraph so things don't seem so awkward. If nothing seems awkward, then you came after I updated it. In that case, carry on! Thanks!!
Hmm... I may be wrong but I don't think that blueblood was entirely truthful. It's obvious Fredrick does have something blueblood wants, that being gravitas with the celestial sisters (particularly Luna).
I am intrigued and will eagerly await the continuation, Flammenwerfer.
5361497 Hmmmm... That could be a possibility given his self proclaimed nature. I guess we'll just have to wait and see what he does!
I approve of Fred's last thought completely and deeply wish it happened to me too. I find myself relating to him in way too many situations xD
Where's my insulin? That ending gave diabeeetus
5361551 You gonna share that. My blood sugar is over 9000 mg /gL
like the story still, i can't imagine bluebloods true motives
can't wait for the next chapter
stay classy
I really do like your take on Blueblood. It's very refreshing to have Blueblood actually be helpful for once. Sure he has his own selfish reasons to help Fred but I can dig that. Earning Celestia's and Luna's trust seems like a reasonable explanation. It's a power move. Blueblood is only helping Fred for personal gain. It fits his nature.
not diabeeetus, how could have this happen doctor?
-You read to much fan fiction
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Too...Too Adorable!
I honestly think that BlueBlood won't blackmail Fredrik, but i do believe that he will do something to sabotage his and Luna's relationship.
love this chapter it is just so cute.
blueblood and blackmail just go hand and hand this should be good.
I hope the 'sharing is caring' rule applies here(Celestia and Luna).
https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&ei=6e2GVJDhEIS1ggT_7YPQBA&url=http://m.youtube.com/watch%3Fv%3DrPbYI1KFYwY&ved=0CBwQtwIwAA&usg=AFQjCNHNtvNPn_etw_tA_gIxLldyjkHXKQ&sig2=tk1jTH40Hwd-GQS47hkRcA
Nope!
Oh. That's why. I feel Blue blood about to betray Fred.
Love the fact that Blueblood fully knows that he is a douche and is fine with it.
Can't wait for the next part!
I found a very minor typo that you may want to edit.
5362647 indeed! Let me fix that. Thank you
Ponification via buck to the head. Novel.
This chapter was very cute.
Yup. I pronounce lol, too, and I almost never make a smart decision whilst doing so.
5362090 Im sorry, it doesn't work that way.
Was that an Arby 'n' the Chief reference?
5364388 No, but I know EXACTLY what you're talking about. Arby n the Chief got me to say 'lol' way too often
5364429
Ha ha yeah, I get what you mean; I was commenting that because the Chief says "lol I'm gonna mutilate the shit outta this thing" at one point.
20 Parter? I'm sold.
FUCK YEA. ARBY N THE CHIEF REFERENCE!
That's a cookie, with a hole cut in it.
n0, it's c0ck of duty, mod3rn g4y fuck stupid.
Oh my word, that show was the shit while it lasted.
OH YOU SON OF A BITCH!
I do not understand this section and feel you could put em dashes around it. —
But being on better terms with the Princesses is valuable... So Fred does have something to offer and Bileblood is lying.
I thought they were more anthro than that. Having actual fleshy feet.
Guess it beat out the tickle war from days previous.
I get the feeling "THEE" should be used here.
You have an unneeded space at the beginning of this sentence.
Now ravage her!
5364269 I don't see a problem with that as long as its Luna, or Nightmare Moon.
This chapter ending was sweet. ^^
You didn't. No way in hell.
...
You did.
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See, I like the way you've portrayed Blueblood here. It seems right to me.
I like this Blueblood. Can I have some more?
The feels.. They harm me..... more please
5370193 Well, sounds like a personal issue then.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
5370193 Note to self: sneak in a 'let's split up, gang' just for WorldWalker128
I don't why I'm getting so ticked off about something in a fan fic even its one thing... it's the references to diabetes. They're just making me angry for some reason... I really shouldn't be so in a twist about it, but I am.
-btw if you read most fan fics you'll probably see the reason I'm getting angry about it. I don't care if you think I'm a jerk by posting rather understandable posts in my profile, I'm being level headed.
Still a good story though...
Edit: bottom line gone.
5371979 Interesting, I've not seen many references at all to it... or maybe I just don't notice it. And no, I don't think you're a jerk or anything you're just expressing your opinion. All I can say is 'each to their own.'
5372055 I've seen it a lot. Your not the first to use in the way you use it. I'm not offended. I'm just slightly ticked about how some people use it because it's more poking at the audience in others that I've seen.
Broke the 1000 upvote milestone for the first time. Absolutely incredible. Thank you ALL!
Stops here, thinks:
Wow... Is Blueblood actually trying to help for once? I don't believe these words.
Oh noes! I seem to be out of chapters!
5418421 well the way i see it, he will gaan more by the current deal then by simply telling on them.
Great story really like it thus far hoping for more soon
"Summing it all up, Blueblood was a dick…. a complete penis; One of Equestria’s many schlongs that wanted to wave about in circles vying for the most attention in what one could consider a national cock-comparison spanning generations." Literally the greatest thing I've read in a fic for a loooong time. Thank you Flammenwerfer, you brought a great smile to my face.
Sehr gut Herr flammenwerfer!
OH MY GOD YOU HAVE 1337 LIKES!
Where can I find these spells?!
Flammen, the entire time I was reading this, I didn't know it was made by you; untill I saw that little thing in the authors note saying "now im off to draft chapter 30 of Equis." and then I thought, "wait a moment." and decided to check the author name. I knew I recognised that awesome style of writing that you and your editors write in.