Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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I love this chapter.
And so, Anon's brain snapped...
And apparently, Celly approves.
mmm yes, continue please
Gears be grindin'.
fuckin lel
more please, this is good writting
and not just clop with a story, but story with (hell yes) bonus of clop
win-win
Ya just can't stop a sexy troll.
I love how you've made this a love story instead of a one-shot slut-fest. Not that I'm opposed to some "intimate" "connections"
ehm...i don´t mind the nearly sex, i just want to ask about something. If i understood it right, he doesn´t asked if she maybe liked him too, and just accepted that she nearly seduced him and just wanted to continue? I am confused because it looked like he doesn´t wanted the sex withouth knowing this a moment befor.
Maybe i miss something again because i missunderstand some words (German), but i am more or less sure that it is written more or less like i said. Please help me with this if it should be different.
Well they have a nice relationship and normal i would not like the heat thing, because it sometimes looks like they want sex or do the sex without really wanting it, but that is probably the fault of the people who have written it that way. PS: I forgot ....they have a nice relationship and i think i like it till now.
5169476 Mit sehr gute freunde von verschiedene gender, teasing passiert jedermal. So teasing zwischen zwei gute freunde nicht "Ich moege dir ficken" ist. Luna, hier, wanted company from her best friend, aber sie war "in heat." Sie sind richtig: wann 'heat' passiert, their friendship could be strained due to potential for clues and hints that aren't. Anon, once he knew, decided not to take it so hard because this was probably a result of her being "in heat." Was he offended? Nein, aber jetzt, er hat dass sie war NICHT 'in heat' gefindet.
Beide hat gute relations, aber jetzt, das konnen einege dinge wechseln.
(Ich brauche meine Deutsch uben. Es tut mir leid falls mein Deutsch kann sehr arm sein.)
5169464 It's a 'love' story in a sense that it's gonna be a very... interesting one. It's central not to two people who meet, fall in love, fuck, then live happily ever after. This is centered around two best friends and the sexual tension that can happen between two best friends of opposite sex. Of course, one can choose to ignore or act upon those impulses, and there are consequences for both parties for each choice.
I'm sure you can figure out what choice they will eventually make, but yes, there will be MANY "intimate" moment spaced throughout the story. I may write as eloquently as I can, but expect that writing style to change quite a bit when it comes down to "nitty-gritty details" of said intimate moments
5169555 fantastic. Good to know.
Oh good god. Luna tricked him and got a feel of him. Naughty Anon
5169507 i think i understand it know, your german is probably as good as my englisch grammar, i can´t write more difficult sentences with good grammar.
Well to be sure i only need to know one thing, if i understand you right, Luna is actually not in heat theat moment?
PS: I noticed i somehow missed a bit of the text it seems.
5169653 Gleich.
And exactly! Celestia revealed that Luna indeed WASN'T in heat. So that changes a few things. Now he needs to figure out what she was up to and why she lied. Part III will be very interesting
Well the scene feels still a bit strange, but i know the whole part after i read the missing part too.
I would have understood it if i don´t missed the last part. But i think i prefer it to know how they got into that sort of relationship normally.
That doesn´t means i can´t like that. I think i just don´t like the heat thing that much. But you write it actually not bad.
Soooooo, Luna lied so she could feel him up? That's really sneaky lady.
5169704 That's indeed the premise! I wonder what happens in part III.
Quite good, but this chapter still annoys me a bit... you teased us so well I can't help but be a bit irked by the cloplessness.
Moar. Now. Please. Sorry, not sorry
5169603 But she did offered to get felt up in return, so... Actually, I'm not sure how that makes things better.
Suspicious Anon turned Suspicious. I look forward to see how he'll look into this.
5169704 yes she lied but as we read the last 2 sentences anon got REALLY nervous maybe Luna lied because she was worried that if she told anon "i really love you more than a friend" he would get scared a bolt from Luna's room then spend the next 4 months avoiding her and if the last sentence is any indication that may well now be a reality
P good so far, but I believe the most important question right now is:
Do you werf flammen?
Suspicious CorruptedNightmare is suspicious....
Well there goes her curiosity..... I'm just really...... Oh what the fuck
Suspicious The564mumble is suspicious
I hope Anons first confrontation with a mare in heat is in one of the flashbacks. Those first meetings in HiE fics are the most intresting.
5169875 it is a lie to hide her emotions me thinks
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Goooooood Gooooood they're drawing conclusions and inferences in their discussions
5169971 I certainly do! You should see my best friend Sturmgewehr 44: he gewehrs 44 sturms!
5170206 That and I am sure she wouldn't have control if in heat :P
5169890 But even so, it was revealed in Part 1 that he would not oppose such a progression of relations with her... though that would bring in a whole new list of things to tackle right off the bat. It's a classic example of those two friends that we've had that refuse to hook up (even though they REALLY want to) because of reasons and fears unfounded
5170214
You must get that so much. Does it ever get old?
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Aw, I figured you could have just linked to the artist's deviantart page, least the one that has the picture. DevArt will block the NSFW stuff unless someone is logged in and has checked the ability to see mature content.
Tut tut Luna, I wonder what you'll have to say for yourself now?
Looking forward to more chapters!
Oh i cant wait to see how Anon processes this answer.
Anon.exe has stopped working plz reboot.
Mein Gott...
Heh heh. Me Gusta.
dat bombshell dough!
The title reminds me of this song:
5170277 HE DOES HAVE A D.A. HUZZAH! THANK YOU!!!
5170276 Surprisingly not as often as you think, mainly because everyone thinks the same thing: "awww he gets it all the time I'm not gonna say it."
In actuality through my entire time on fimfiction, I've only been asked about four times, including below. And honestly, I don't mind. It's an icebreaker and part of a meme family that really never gets old.
I'm surprised when I started reading the first chapter I did not think much of it, but you got something good here, it's quite excellent. So please do continue to strip me away from PAYDAY 2 heists just to read the next chapter!
Ah…but doesn't those kind of things can DE synchronized too? what its to say that, Luna just got hers a bit early now, I would had think that the certantly of that is more like 85 maybe 90%.
Boy is he going to be mad at her, for lying.
Celestia she is so much trouble
5170736 They CAN be, though moreso, even in reality, I hear more about women's cycles (which I treat as the heat cycle in this universe more or less) being synchronized rather than desynchronized. I don't know how or why they do it, but apparently it's pretty common. As someone who has a disproportionately high amount of female friends, you pick up a few things... sometimes things you REALLY don't want to know lel
5170804 You clever devil... that's brilliant.
And now that I reread that, there is something off about that sentence. Lemme fix that. Thanks!
5170805
Je try lived with 4 older sisters on a family of 5 kids, and to answer I think, just think is more of less the hormone they release…like an invisible not smelly fart, that they…kind of smell without realizing and tricking their bodies, making the domino effect
That its why its happen more in close, and warm zones like a room with not much windows, or a fast food restaurant if they are more than 3 or 4 woman's. I think is in the sweat when they had the cycle, the time came they release the hormone and boom, synchronized.
Its kind of a gift from our ape ancestors since in that time the woman did that, to announce she is ready to bare chindrens to the male…
Like I say, just a theory
well that was unexpected......i can't wait to see what he will do or what will happen next chapter
stay classy
5170646 Well I thank you for your kind words. Hopefully I can continue to live up to those expectations. Of course, certain writing styles will inevitably change come more... intimate moments. Keeping up a more eloquent writing style makes it feel more romanticized than it should, in my opinion, but I digress.
5170677 Hahaha I'll do my best! Thanks for reading and I hope you continue to enjoy!
So I take it you decided not to provide the protagonist with a name? I was kinda hoping, but I didn't really expect you to. Still, a good story but for that one point. Unfortunately, that one point is a major turn off for me in any story. Good luck in your writing though!
5171098 Hey, each to their own. Thanks for giving it a chance!
like I believe that is all I need to say