When a spell performed by Twilight Sparkle goes wrong, a power-hungry dimensional rift appears and sends her and the rest of the gang to a world known as Arad. Now it is up to a cursed man named Jonas and his group of friends to help guide the ponies back to the world they once knew and unlock the potential they all possess.
Oh hey! I know it isn't a good start but anybody who can offer some constructive criticism please help out ok!?
I just read the first chapter, it's cool. i will read the other latter (because this cahir is giving me pain in the back)
248 OMG THANK YOU THANK YOU~ haha You made my day!
Hmm... Needs the Mage now. She'd totally fit in with the ponies; especially if she was a Witch.
256 Oh you are reading my mind, guess who I'm making the witch hehe
Well shoot, a chapter devoted to building Richter's personality. Sorry guys, no real story advancement this time
Ok, even I dont want to do the character developing chapters, but it has to be done...
I seriously want to get this story out of Elvenguard so I can actually get going with it, but it would be weird to rush the things I want to get in
Editing Time! So you guys don't have to deal with my grammar errors any more!
Whether or not you like it, I think I am getting better. And I AM posting more stuff, dealwithit.jpg
What is this a crossover with?
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I believe this is a crossover with Arad Senki(anime/online game?)
Update soon please? :)