I am really enjoying this story it far surpasses your first four stories in this arc. I eagerly await your next chapter. I want to see if Alex can try to overcome this parasite and that Celestia can truly find a cure. I also await the big reveal is he Alex or is he Xander. This story is going to be good no matter the outcome
I heard Andrew WK in my head singing Getting Ready to Die, AKA, the song in Cupcakes HD. More specifically, the part where he goes "You're just a parasite, so close your eyes and say goodnight!"
I'm a Whovian too, so I'm having trouble seeing the reference in this chapter.
So I'm trying to put this together. This 'parasite' is a piece of Luna/Nightmare Moon that was imprinted on a blanket of hers, that transferred over to Cadance. In that time it started manipulating her and growing stronger until she was able to take over Cadance, then it left her body and went into Alex's. Is that right?
Also wasn't Alex immune to magic? Did the events of the Nightmare removed his immunity?
"AH THE PAIN!" the cry escaping my mate's muzzle tore at my heart. "Someone stop the p-p-p-AHAHAHAHA!" Hyper realistic bloody tears began to leak from his eyes, more hyper realistic blood dribbling from his nostrils. His entire body was shaking with such a force, that I thought with no uncertainty it would fall apart. When hyper realistic foam began to form inside his mouth however, that's when I lost all remnants of self-control and screamed to the high heavens.
4878868 So it's just a piece of Luna before her banishment and not actually her? As to how/why it was imprinted on a blanket of hers I don't know. Does that mean Luna is still on the moon?
She's still on the moon, and that blanket is a thousand year old blanket. One from before...one that Luna and Xander spent a lot of time together upon.
I personally don't like your stories, Zamairac, but I'm going to upvote this anyway because you're objectively one of the few people who actually writes the Human in Equestria genre well.
I just... I can't keep reading this. Honestly I barely made it through eternal nightmare, torture stories really piss me off. So I'll be leaving this one here and now and withdrawing my follow and favorites of this series... I just can't stand to see any of it anymore.
Trying to figure out the Doctor Who reference. The idea of an ancient parasite kind of reminds me of Tooth and Claw (with the werewolf), but the general feel of it also makes me think of Professor Yana and the Time Lord watch. Hmmm.
All this is good, but I'm still wondering what the hell ever happened to Xander, presumably he died, since Luna went insane and all trying to bring him back, but what then?
Alicorns have one life mate aye? So is Luna just eternally screwed out of love now? Hopefully you address this eventually (probably when/if Luna ever returns).
So the blanket holds some essence of her magic, but what I am getting is that the blanket absorbed the negativity from when Luna tore through the mare that tried to separate them.
Her rage, jealousy, possessiveness, it was absorbed like a sponge and overtime molded into a personality that only remembers the Luna that killed the mare.
And if I recall, Celestia was the one who sent the mare.
Lastly I am guessing that the parasite was triggered, born or whatever, from Cadance discovering her alicorn instinct. Though she mainly moved the sun when she let herself go hulk, I am going to say some small output of that alicorn instinct gave life to the negativity in the blanket.
Demon possession - check Human being screwed the f@ck over - check Celestia banishing demon to the middle of the Sun then castraiting it while also decapitating it and performing an exorcism - In progress
I hope Luna shows up and is nice and sweet and all around not a Nightmare Moon. Seriously Nightmare you f@cked up Luna's street cred!
So now celestia knows who it was that Luna loved all those years ago.
please have a happy ending
What a tie in lol
Am I a bad person for sort of hoping that Alex becomes Luna's mate Xander?
I am really enjoying this story it far surpasses your first four stories in this arc. I eagerly await your next chapter. I want to see if Alex can try to overcome this parasite and that Celestia can truly find a cure. I also await the big reveal is he Alex or is he Xander. This story is going to be good no matter the outcome
I heard Andrew WK in my head singing Getting Ready to Die, AKA, the song in Cupcakes HD. More specifically, the part where he goes "You're just a parasite, so close your eyes and say goodnight!"
DAMN! Knew it was the Nightmare, but didn't have the facts to back it up! This is so good! Keep em coming, cause I'm HUNGRY!
The emotional roller coaster continues. You enjoy our suffering, zam.
4877001 :P
I'm a Whovian too, so I'm having trouble seeing the reference in this chapter.
So I'm trying to put this together. This 'parasite' is a piece of Luna/Nightmare Moon that was imprinted on a blanket of hers, that transferred over to Cadance. In that time it started manipulating her and growing stronger until she was able to take over Cadance, then it left her body and went into Alex's. Is that right?
Also wasn't Alex immune to magic? Did the events of the Nightmare removed his immunity?
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She made him stronger, but to have done so she had to feed on something.
Care to guess what?
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Pain, misery, fear?
this chapter reminded me of the exorcist
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Immunity
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So she feed on his immunity which explains why magic affects him. So we can say that he's immune to immunity.
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Actually it's not just magic immunity she fed on, but his actual immune system, thus the foaming of his mouth.
The parasite loves him, or at least believes it does, but it's making him very ill by staying.
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So what is this parasite exactly? I'm staring to get a Harry Potter vibe more than a Dr. Who vibe here.
I had to add it!
4877438 Yes.
4878809 How dare you violate my emotions this way!.....please continue....I like the abuse
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A remnant of Luna's instinct if you haven't already figured it out
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So it's just a piece of Luna before her banishment and not actually her? As to how/why it was imprinted on a blanket of hers I don't know. Does that mean Luna is still on the moon?
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She's still on the moon, and that blanket is a thousand year old blanket. One from before...one that Luna and Xander spent a lot of time together upon.
Think it through, you'll figure it out
I personally don't like your stories, Zamairac, but I'm going to upvote this anyway because you're objectively one of the few people who actually writes the Human in Equestria genre well.
I just... I can't keep reading this. Honestly I barely made it through eternal nightmare, torture stories really piss me off. So I'll be leaving this one here and now and withdrawing my follow and favorites of this series... I just can't stand to see any of it anymore.
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To each their own I suppose.
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Thanks...I think
No kiss [youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=WWaLxFIVX1s]
Only one word.
Trying to figure out the Doctor Who reference.
The idea of an ancient parasite kind of reminds me of Tooth and Claw (with the werewolf), but the general feel of it also makes me think of Professor Yana and the Time Lord watch.
Hmmm.
Oh! OOOH!
I GOT IT!
IT'S 42!
BURN WITH ME!
4881512
All this is good, but I'm still wondering what the hell ever happened to Xander, presumably he died, since Luna went insane and all trying to bring him back, but what then?
Alicorns have one life mate aye? So is Luna just eternally screwed out of love now? Hopefully you address this eventually (probably when/if Luna ever returns).
So the blanket holds some essence of her magic, but what I am getting is that the blanket absorbed the negativity from when Luna tore through the mare that tried to separate them.
Her rage, jealousy, possessiveness, it was absorbed like a sponge and overtime molded into a personality that only remembers the Luna that killed the mare.
And if I recall, Celestia was the one who sent the mare.
Lastly I am guessing that the parasite was triggered, born or whatever, from Cadance discovering her alicorn instinct. Though she mainly moved the sun when she let herself go hulk, I am going to say some small output of that alicorn instinct gave life to the negativity in the blanket.
So tell me please...am I correct?
Survey says???
hahahahaha...Dr Who sucks...................just kidding i never seen it, but i have the opportunity to but just can bring myself to watch it
I don't remember this thing happening with Luna, what story was that?
4882307 i think your right on your point it must be what happened
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I hope I have some idea to it that is correc
Ummm...Wow, alright
Woah, that was kinda intense.
Pleasseeeeee continue the anticipation is killing meeeee
Demon possession - check
Human being screwed the f@ck over - check
Celestia banishing demon to the middle of the Sun then castraiting it while also decapitating it and performing an exorcism - In progress
I hope Luna shows up and is nice and sweet and all around not a Nightmare Moon.
Seriously Nightmare you f@cked up Luna's street cred!
What a sexy chapter! ;)
Wonder how this is gonna end.
With you, it could go either way.
Ah well, final chapter awaits
Well, 'Light 'em up' just started playing on my computer, and now I'm imagining what Celestia and Cadance are going to do to the other Luna.
Well, Celestia is a living flamethrower.....
Light 'em up, up, up, light 'em up, up, up......
I thought it was Nightmare Moon trying to possess him but it's the same evil, with a bit of Luna's instinct, that corrupted Luna?
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You should. Best show. Start on S1 E1, or you'll think it's stupid.
Oh praise the sun... "Endless Nightmare" never actually happened.
5299067 My songs know what you did in the dark, so light them up.