The residents of New Humansville continue to work toward a better and more stable society in their new home of Equestria, before the big announcement of their existence by Princess Celestia and Princess Luna to the rest of the world.
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Well that answers how the changelings have been surviving.
The bestiality conversation already happened in UP1. Feels a bit redundant here.
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her announcement, and 'made for wary eyes' just seems like awkward phrasing
misplaced space between persecution, and comma.
Not incorrect, but inconsistent with your writing, as you've been capitalizing titles, like Queen.
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Aha! My faithful readers have found typos! Once I return to my domicile I shall correct!
I though that beastiality stuff were done with? And what the heck? Artex is the one who put that law in effect!
Mari is taking the part of the intermediate, so that the human town can work with ponies, and animals etc get used to them by only having to interact, observe one at a time? Maybe he could do whith another towel, clogs, and a work kit? Then again, if he has access to knapped flint, thats pretty much everything. Only needs a piece of steel for other uses. Manticore cub is going to be fun. Go fish?
First there was a Changeling, then a Changeling, then a ruckus, then the next chapter? Will the Changelings be able to show what other races are available before they also arrive?
5144982 Very astute. Was wondering if somebody would point that out.
5145346 I noticed that, too. But, I assumed you had good reason so I let it slide.
5146756 Again correct. Some issues have more than one viewing. And some characters have subscriptions instead of issues.
5146898 Indeed my friend.
Typos annihilated! HA! Hahahahahaha!
Very stronk story, much like.
Second Live Character Q&A was an absolute flop. Only 3 people posted any questions, which is less than last time, so I'm not going to do any more of them. It's a waste of my time and everyone else's and it's depressing as shit.
This story needs to be added to some groups. I would do it, but the new method of adding stories to groups seems incompatible with my cheapass tablet.
Sorry I missed the QA. Got called into work that night and couldn't make it, unfortunately. If you do happen to want to do another, I'll do what I can to make it in and pick your brain.
I absolutely did not expect that from Mario. I also wonder if Razor overheard that conversation?
If I remember correctly, that's exactly what happened.
5159387 I have a little objection to make about Artex, you seem to have twisted his character here a bit in a few points that contradict his previous behavior.
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How can he say that, when it contradicts his previous opinion? Wasn't HE the emissary chosen to sign the Unity Pact and didn't he argue in favor of inter-species relationships between humans and ponies when it came up to be put into law? When that one woman complained about bestiality, he a gave her a rebuttal including some quotes of the new testament, to placate her, and made it undoubtedly clear that ponies, or rather kavim as he said, are no beasts or simple minded animals but people.
Since he argued in favor of this point during the gathering, even used the same quote and defined 'creature' as 'creature' for that woman, not as just mankind, why is he NOW saying the exact opposite? Doesn't make sense! Especially since he spent more time with the apple family and other ponies than any other human, he lives with them as close as possible, shared his blood with them. He of all humans should see them clearly as people, persons, not animals. He calls AJ his sister, but goes hyper discussing parental relationships with Mario here? I think you should correct this part, even if it means cutting out a big part of their conversation and editing his response. But as it stands now, his arguments make zero sense, considering his previous point of view during the signing of the Unity Pact.
HE was the emissary signing and speaking to his people, the Unity Pact and all those laws that promote equality, so how he argues here makes no sense at all.
In addition his body changed, and if his reproductive system changed on a level in favor of Kavim mare's, he should be able to feel basic urges kicking in. Maybe not with every mare, but those close to him like Razor? Definitely.
One of his final arguments during the signing of the Unity Pact was "Last time I checked, love conquers all", and now he is implying the exact opposite.
Feels like all he said during the gathering was just hot air, pleas correct that.
WOAH! WOOOOOOOAH!!! POSSIBLE LOVE TRIANGLE?!
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Heh, Mario.
Considering the animosity of the ponies they knew where going to have, Mike should have held an announcement about the lings. Better to be proactive than to react to a mob.
I have to agree with what 5720094 said. He did a complete 180 on his previous stand. I could understand if he said he wasn't physically attracted to kavim personality, but to go against his own arguments and compare them to animals makes no sense
I just want to point out that Artex was making the contradictions that Mario was making at the unity pact and it feels like you might have just switched his personality.
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That or maybe this Artex is really a Changeling still working for Crysalis?