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Uh-huh.
I mean, it's not really bad, but it's also not really good. It's certainly an interesting story, though.
I can't get into this; anon's too much of a Dick in the beginning, the plot is all over the place, and it isn't that funny.
It's not bad, but you'll have to make Anon likeable before you try and make him the hero of the story.
Add a few more chapters so that we'll learn to like Anon, have the readers learn more about his relationship with his family and give us some backstory on Anon himself.
awesome chapter you are doing amazing job i can't wait to see the next chapter
OH YEEEEEAAAAHHHH
GO DOC!!!! WRITE DAT GREAT STORY, I SEEN WHAT YOU COULD DO ON THE GTA THREADS
THIS STORY IS DEF. A "10/10 GUARANTEED"
4844480 9/10 its okay -ign
like skyrim with severe brain damage -adam kovich, mashitima
As a fan of Deus Ex, you have won my internets. Enjoy them.
When is he next fucking chapter??????!!!!!!!!
6623380 I think in about....a couple hundred years
7038545 bullshit!
7046459 Its ok...life will get better...hopefully.
7049252 I hope