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Bright Keys


Getting over 6 years of writer's block.

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In the fallen Equestria of now, all of the leaders of Equestria were randomly found dead in their homes, no cause, no signs. Soon afterwards, Equestria fell into anarchy, destroyed in the flame of war. Tali, a young earth pony, hopes to make things better. He collects supplies and trades them to help support his family composed of his grandfather, his mother, an older brother and a younger sister. To rebuild civilization, Tali must find all of the gems within the Alicorn Amulet and then proceed to purify the amulet so he may be able to rebuild what has been lost to the flame of war. Oh, and there's one more obstacle in his way. The Burned.


Description, filler, and edited by Dudodian
Constructive criticism is welcome and recommended.
I will be performing revisions on previous chapters. For the most part, they shall be small, a comma here, leaving out a period there, but in some places I might add a sentence or remove one.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

We'll be coming with more soon! Thank you lots :) We were happy to make this and couldn't wait to come out with it. Keys was even getting slightly impatient! :ajsmug:

wow, so good. You really improved it from the snippet I saw. I can't wait to read more! The scene with his family was fantastic! :pinkiehappy:

4768956 I actually wasn't sure how that was going to turn out. Thanks! I've already started on chapter 2. I really have to thank Dudodian for filler sentences.

Comment posted by Dudodian deleted Aug 1st, 2014
Comment posted by Dudodian deleted Aug 1st, 2014

Aww, you're so nice :D

wow! So good! Nice job, both of you! :twilightsmile:

Sorry for taking so long! Writer's block strikes at the worst of times! :flutterrage: :raritycry:

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