The writer (me) after getting a tooth pulled has a imaginary discussion with his My Little Pony Figures. And it gets weird.
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Silver Wrench
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I'M MOTHERFUDGING SLAGAR THE CRUEL!
LORD OF CAPS LOCKS!
SORROW OF WATERSHIP DOWN!
KING OF TOURS!
EATER OF FRIED ICECREAM AND ARCH DUKE OF SOME KNOWN COUNTRY IN AFRICA!
AND I CLAIM.....
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this story is brilliant, it's like one big drug trip, surreal, odd, creative and just plain imaginative good job
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Thanks, and it only cost me a broken decade tooth, and $67 Co-pay and $7 for generic Loratab.
Truth is I did have a tooth pulled, and wrote the bulk of this story right after coming from the procedure.
546808
Nice Redwall reference, but was all of that really necessary?
As for the story; I like the concept. But like Rarity said, some spelling and grammar could be improved.
546987
First post must always be overkill
and i agree the concept is interesting i await your next chapter
546956
so while you were still on the painkillers you thought the story up?
Que?
LMFAO, I remember this. I never thought you'd actually written it. And if pinkie had come over, why didn't you call me. I would have been there in a flash man.
Btw, a moustache for the shameless plug of my story!!!
ha! pinkie and the bacon. also, Rarity was right. grammar dude
also, Fluttershy does not approve of your video games. 
bad Silver Wrench made her cry.
Cornucopia - Black Sabbath
546994
As the story suggested, I was right after the procedure , novacaine is still in effect and I didn't have my prescription yet.
But yes I wrote the 1st chapter right after getting a tooth pulled, it was ether play on TF2 (with was still updating) play Sykrim or go on Fim Fic, I decided to go on Fim Fic and that story was writen.
547260
You know this could be the next chapter.
547313
Fluttershy had no issue with Lumines Supernova, Little Big Planet and strangely Disgaea 3.
Apparently Fluttershy is a fan of anime.
Wow... first off. I cried while reading this. For some reason, no matter how much you wash your hands after handling ghost pepper sauce, it is still a bad idea to touch your eyes afterwards. aagghhh the painnn!!!
Second, after getting your tooth pulled, did anything happen that caused you to write this? Like were you hearing voices and since you were a bit dazed did you assume they came from the ponies? That would be awesome.
Third, only one tooth pulled and you were in pain? Pfffttttt I had to get 4 wisdom teeth surgically removed. Apparently I was the first patient of this dentist's to not get put under for the procedure in like 20 years. Hurray? I am wayyy too paranoid to let them fuck with my mouth when I am not conscious; I also didn't let them use laughing gas on me, that stuff is weird as hell. It was rather fun to listen to them breaking the wisdom teeth so they could remove them and when they cut around the teeth, huge amounts of blood ran down my throat. It was, well... interesting. Some cupcakes level shit happened that day, lol.
So is this going to be continued? The story says it is incomplete but the way you ended this chapter made it feel like a wrap-up thing for a one-shot. Still a great story though, it was rather funny.
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Oh I was not in horrible unspeakable agony afterwards but I did really felt out of it. The real pain was before the tooth got pulled.
Having a broken and rotten tooth festering in there threatening infection isn't fun.
Also I did get 3 wisdom teeth and a impacted molar removed about 12 years ago so I do understand how it felt.
No I was not under any real influence of drugs or anything when I wrote it, call it a creative bug bit at the oddest time and I just ran with it.
I was debating writing a 2nd chapter, hence why it was marked unfinished.
555724 yeh... rotting teeth doesnt sound fun.
As for the second chapter, I don't know if this story would need it. While it would be cool to have a second chapter, adding any more to the story might ruin the awesome first chapter. If you decide to make a second chapter, you should probably send it to a few people to begin with and ask what they think you should do after reading it. You know what I'm saying?
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Well I never (in my mind) actually ended the story I kinda ended where I did abruptly.
I have no idea what to do with a 2nd chapter. I can always just do a different 1 shot story that connected to this story.
So.... you wrote this.....while hallucinating.....
Dear god, what happens next?
555946 Yah I'd write it as a different one shot
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Not hallucinating, just got a crazy idea while looking at my actual MLP figures and the idea stuck.
As I said before I got a idea and ran with it, I only submit it recently after I cleaned up much of the story,
lol take this
you earned it
I'm seeing my Eevee doll move now... but when I look directly at it, It's right back where it usually is. What has this story done to me?
I thought of something similar a few weeks ago, except it was going to be about them talking to the narrator during the story in a Okami-san and her Seven Companion type of way.
Oh and funny story btw!