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no . orion gone from this world before even having a chance at it. and with the way blood killed orion, has prevented aurora from getting pregnant again.
call me sadistic but that line makes me like Blood Dawn
4709549 even after what he did to Aurora?
Damn it. I knew where this was going ever since Grim Night said that Blood needed to drink the blood of someone pure, but I still felt like I got kicked in the chest when it happened. I have a damn good feeling that Twilight is going to bring the wrath of Gaia on those two when she finds out what happened to her grandson, provided that Rainbow Dash leaves her anything to destroy. Either that or you'll kill Rainbow and completely crush everyone's spirits. Why can't they just get their happily ever after?
Lovely chapter. On that rather horrifying note; I was planning on going to bed after reading this chapter...hehe... Now I guess I have to watch or read something that is stupidly happy unless I want more nightmares than usual... *sigh* Like I said though, really good chapter. Just not good for me mentally...
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I hope Rainbow makes it outa this, Twidash did state in the comments of BoI that he wouldn't be killing RD or Twi anymore. but plans can change as stories dictate
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t was horrific, what he did to Aurora, but his upbeat attitude and sadistic glee make it hard for me to hate him, as a character.
Yes his acts are gruesome, morbid and unforgivable. Just what he did to the diamond dogs is something out of a horror film. But that line, the way it was written, I don't know, I just can't hate his character.
4714268 i like his character but him himself can go burn in tartarus
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There are those villains that you know have to lose, have to die, but still you will be sad when it happens and you will miss them when they are gone. You know, villains like Spike in Buffy the Vampire Slayer; He was sadistic, cruel, malicious, and downright evil. But you loved him. Blood Dawn is like that for me, now Grim on the other hand can burn in the pits or Tartarus. That guy is truly diabolical.
Talking of Grim, you know he wouldn't give Blood all that power unless he knew a way to take it from him.
4714268 I had a 'Jeepers Creepers' vibe in my head when i thought of that
Blood Dawn is simply a sadist who wants to watch the world burn, when i think of him I imagined a cross between the joker and deadpool
Grim… he is anything but, what makes matters worse is that he had a taste of true power (his time as Twilight Night)
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I was thinking of using Deadpool as a reference in my comment but disregarded since he was an anti-hero instead of a villain. I can definitely see his personality in Blood Dawn though.
I can't believe I didn't think of Joker from The Dark Knight. That is almost perfect.
4714329 i'm gonna get staked by someone for this but i never watched buffy. or make the power consume blood
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For its time it was a pretty good show. Had a heavy cult following for a while.
The spin-off Angel was better in my opinion.
4714837 agreed lol
The Buffy ending was too dues-ex-machana for my taste
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The whole seventh season seemed like they were just grasping. The end was like, ok we have no clue how to end this so here, we blow up the hell mouth and turn all potentials into slayers sooooo, yeah.
4712921 It would be really early for a happy ever after the story is only 25% done
4714952 don't even get me started on the bad guy.
The first?
They ran out of ideas
4751439 read bats and TAW
They are two of my favs
For the last chapter I nearly cried for the pain that Rainbow Dash had to endure when Twilight got her memory back and was mad at her. But now I really am shedding a few tears for what has happened and I am a 28 year old man. But I am also enraged by this turn of events.....Twidashforever whenever you make the chapter that takes Blood out I do not want you just to kill him...no...... I want you to make him suffer uninmanageable pain, for every drop of blood he has spilt I want you to give him a thousand years to feel that pain and as for Grim Night double it just because he thought it up in the first place. Make them suffer in hell for all eternity and have Rainbow Dash, Twighlight Sparkle, Aurora Flash, and Night to put those two there. Now that I said my peace.... I cannot wait to read more.
Also what I meant when said "I hope nothing bad happens too soon" I was hoping that something like this chapter would not happen..... not for another 4 or 5 chapters at least. But your are right nothing really did happen until now and what is a good story with out it's turn for worse chapters. As I have always said you derfinately keep your audience captivated.... I mean I am still very pissed off (not at you of course) but I still definitely want to read more......if only to see Blood die in the most gruesome and uninmanageable way possible. And as always keep up the up the good work.
I will do just that but if you do not mind me asking. Do either of them have a set series? If they do which is their first story? If not which story do you recommened me reading first? and remember to let Grim and Blood burn in Tartarus, and I will definitely pay all the bits in all of Equestria just to see that.
ugh...Take note, Twidash: Don't binge on finishing a 500K-plus-word story. Even if the story's really, really good.
Period instead of a comma.
The first ellipse is fine, but I don't think the 2nd needs to be there.
That's up to you, though.
Period instead of a comma.
Needed.
It's like a false positive in Mastermind: Right color/punctuation, wrong placement.
The colon should be in front of "Destination", and where the colon is now there should be a comma.
I don't think that second "somewhere" is necessary.
STAY THE BUCK AWAY FROM ORION!
If this is just a stupid meeting against stupid beings for stupid meetings, why NOT sic the frustrated, irritated, pregnant mare on them?
Well, other than Aurora tearing him a new one if she didn't agree with it. That's always a sufficient con.
First, that's why you should put Aurora against them! That way, if even one synapse works they'll realize that they do NOT want to irritate such a mare and be more amenable to requests!
Secondly, I think the period after "'guests'" needs to be a colon.
...Damn, Aurora. You're good
Meanwhile, every single married stallion (or male of their species) who either has a child or a pregnant wife felt pangs of sympathy, while the bachelors smirk a some joke unknown even to them.
That's honestly pretty fair.
Also, I think the comma after "that she could not deal with right now" should be a period.
Period instead of a comma.
Hmmm, this a number you conjured up for yourself?
Also, wouldn't griffons have longer pregnancy cycles, unless their chicks are smaller than foals? Unless I'm horribly mistaken, the length of pregnancy is measurably (but possibly not directly) proportional to the average size of the child. I'm also not sure if that's regardless of the child's size in comparison to the parent, or just the child's size, period.
Probably should switch around the placement of the comma and ellipse so it looks like "normal life...well, as normal"
Question mark instead of a period.
There should be a comma after "well"
accustomed.
Wait...wait, no! Take the armor!
Or...no, don't...ARGH, I DON'T KNOW WHAT'LL BE BETTER!
Can't speak for the rest of Equestria, but those in Ponyville probably wouldn't trade Aloe and Lotus for anypony or anyone.
Well...when she says, you obey. Everyone else is just lucky to see it, I guess?
First comma is unnecessary.
Comma should be a period.
I may be wrong (and/or self-contradictory), but I don't think that the last item in a list has a comma before it.
Looking for a wedding ring?
Aren't you supposed to ask, THEN knock her up?
Sick fuck.
Proably could just say "used to her late night requests" in fewer words.
And the stalker gets stalked. And/or gave himself away by killing the three guards.
ooh, smart.
son's
Er...You two aren't close enough for that yet, Ataxia.
Hey, you, Dragacorn. Quit imitating your father and thinking lewd thoughts.
Okay, look, I'm aware you might clop to Night at night, but is your infatuation THAT BAD that you imagine the two of you in bed already?
Him? Nothing.
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You got my interest, what fic?
Number i conjured myself, ponies have a 12 month pregnancy (according to wikipedia) griffins are mythical, no one ever said, so I just said 8 months.
Aurora does things on her own schedule
Changes posted, thanks!
I can't believe you wrote that the level of sadness I feel right now is unbearable
That can be taken in 2 ways!
"something", i suppose.
extra comma.
4777060 this needs to be fixed,
Ahh that's better
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