Editor, Writer, Student. Really(awful) bad at updates.
Ever since Luna left, Celestia has been dreading the day she would return. With just days until she comes back, Celestia has to prepare the country, and herself, for what maybe the toughest days seen in nearly 1000 years.
Special Thanks to:
+Clockwork Sprocket, for pre-reading.
+C.R, for the pre-reading.
+Artwork from: http://tamalesyatole.deviantart.com/art/Celestia-Front-361016587
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i really like this story hope to read more soon
I see a dramatic improvement in the grammar and formatting compared to the chapters you wrote earlier. Those early ones still need fixed up, though, especially that first one. Another important thing is that you really should have some way of clearly indicating the difference between visions and reality. It gets rather confusing. Many authors put visions in italics, for example.
convenient magic is convenient