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Wow. Go cheese. It looks like the Pegasi are the last to get their elements. I think Thunderlane will be the last though.
Awesome!!!
I'm loving the story so far, keep up the great work!
~Shiboah
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Alright, how about a friendly bet. I bet Soarin will the last (or second last because of Midnight and his element) to get his element. See you next time.
~Shiboah
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I have an idea what his element will be but i kinda don't want to spoil it... if i am right that is
6674512 Nope
6674499 You won't see any more of it
6675805 i see you don't like the beard
I'll have you know that it took a lot of hard work to make it as beautiful as it is right now
Now come here so i can give you a long and wet kiss full on spit and burger pieces
Pinkie was really feeling very smiley right now. but the big old grin plastered across Cheese' face
Pinkie could not fathom how Cheese could have
almost fell of the stage
grabbing her before she fell off and on her face
it settled into its slot it glowed intense for a brief moment
1: wasn't. And the period should be a comma.
2: how is underlined here
3: Off of/off, one or the other
4:I think that you could switch out on with onto.
5: more Intensely
Awesome chapter, I think the element of music fits well with not only the character, but with his original actor as well, weird al certainly has an element to his music.
6729569 Thnx for pointing out the typos (although the underlining of 'how' was intentional) and for your thoughts
Is it strange that i picture Weird Al still voice-ing Cheese Sandwich?
Anyway, nice little set of chapters. Can't wait to read some more later.
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Not at all, after all Weird Al would make an awesome element of music, there are few artists that have dabbled in as many genres as he has.
Kinda had a feeling that was Cheese's element considering his voice actor.