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Spice it up

Pumpkin Spice is your normal average mare that lives in the fair town of Hoofsapeake. She is already in her young adult stage and lives a pretty normal life. Except for one thing that's been bugging her, she hasn't earned her cutie mark yet. She tries everything, day and night, to try to find what she could possibly be good at. Once she finds it, will she be happy with the results and what those results will bring?

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Chapters (2)

A Morning Flight · 23rd May 2014 · 1,190 words
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The Four Leaf Clover · 11th Jul 2014 · 1,357 words
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Diamond dust

Diamond dust #1 · May 26th, 2014 · · · A Morning Flight ·

good
there's just one thing who's bugging me a bit , may be you shoud add more space between each paragraph to don't get a big giant block of words , some readers doesn't like that and might not read your story just because of that

MidnightSky

MidnightSky #2 · May 26th, 2014 · · · A Morning Flight ·

4449961 thank you so much for the advice I will fix that ASAP! Thanks for reading my story, I will get out a new chapter soon!

XxxDead EndxxX

XxxDead EndxxX #3 · Sep 27th, 2015 · · · The Four Leaf Clover ·

Interesting! I'll stay tuned to find where this goes.
A word of advice, none-cutiemarked OC's are common so why not add something a bit unexpected? I'd suggest looking through other fan fictions with a similar theme and noticing what works and what doesn't. Perhaps you've already considered this or already know what you want from this fic either way I hope my advice was well received.
I see this is your first fanfic on Fimfiction, I wish you luck!