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maribakumon


As of April 19, 2014, I'm a two year brony just trying to delve deeper and become more involved in the brony community.

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When Angel Bunny refuses to eat, Fluttershy goes out of her way to find what she needs to make him his desired dinner. While out and about she goes and finds herself drifting in the breeze.

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Just a little tip. It's better to leave a line and have shorter paragraphs. :twilightsmile:

4309512 Thanks for the input! I tried my best the keep them simple yet to have the purpose of the paragraph within itself. If that makes any sense.... :applejackunsure:

4310096 It makes complete sense :twilightblush:

4310096 Also, I just saw this but, why throw rocks at your computer :applejackconfused: Every-pony will love this Fic!

4310856 I really hope they do. This turned out a whole lot better than I thought it would.

4311765 This was a very good turnout.
I expect good things in the future:twilightsmile:

:fluttershbad: CAUSE I'M FREE!
FREE FALLIN'!

4537507 I like you! You give me witty comments! :rainbowkiss:

4547650 My point exactly! XD

It's a nice story and I actually imagine Fluttershy doing something like this. It may have been short but great non the less! I hope you continue making story's like this, Firebrace out!:yay:

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