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maribakumon


As of April 19, 2014, I'm a two year brony just trying to delve deeper and become more involved in the brony community.

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Today is the day that the Muzzle VR equipment comes out!
In a Sword Art Online style, Button Mash and Sweetie Belle play a game of Minecraft. But this time, they are playing from within the game. Their friendship grows as they fight to survive in this familiar yet so very different game.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 26 )

4464488 I'm not sure if you're exclaiming for more to be written, or that I posted another thing...

Comment posted by Sea_Swirl deleted May 29th, 2014

4467638 wait what other thing did you post I'm talking about being excited about the next chapter

4467730 This is the second fanfic that I've written. The Open Sky is what I was referring to as the other thing.

4467749 Oh ya I was talking about this one srry :twilightsheepish:

A chance, huh? Well, you will find it fun to ship Button and Sweetie together, guaranteed!

4469190 I expect it to be. I already have a ton of ideas for what to put into this story at a later time. The only issue is I can't figure out how to start the second chapter...

4475258 possibly at school, mabye they have bully probs, they team up... And verbally kick DT and SP's asses.

It was a ten minute drive to the nearest Star Bucks.

A ten minute Drive.
Drive.
As in CAR?
Whaaaa..?:rainbowhuh:

4488076 If there are Virtual Reality helmets, don't you think there would be cars?
Or better yet, if there are video games, wouldn't there be cars?

Hey, this is a great story so far! Maybe soon we can add a hint of.....
ButtonBelle?

awesome! cant wait for more! :rainbowkiss:

4488484 I'm glad you think so!:twilightblush:
I'm not very good with words usually, and this is my second fiction. It means a lot to hear that from a stranger.

4488092 Well, Equestria kinda has some weird technology thingies going on. We see arcade machines next to quills and firefly lamps. Couldn't the machines just run on magic?
Also, this does seem pretty good, except that if it's all virtual reality, there really isn't any danger to be faced. Perhaps there's a malfunction in the headset?
Great job so far. Have a moustache. :moustache::

4507096 It's a Slice of Life story, it's not meant to have danger. The VR is only a setting. I don't want to give any spoilers of what I have in mind.

4507160 I understand that, but the set-up, as well as,

Their friendship grows as they fight to survive in this familiar yet so very different game.

make it seem a bit... not Slice of Life. Of course, there's only been 2 Chapters.
In any case, keep up the good work.

4507368 I didn't quite know how to classify it, so I went with Slice of Life.:applejackunsure:

Is nobody else weirded out about them having no problem eating flesh in a FULL IMMERSION game? As in linked to all senses? Including taste?

5209825 I don't believe they've eaten Rotten Flesh...

yet......

5254224 by flesh I mean, porkchops, chicken, beef, etc. remember ponies are herbivores

5254253 I'm aware of this. I've planned to keep them away from anything like that.

5254253 Actually, in the author's note, I mentioned that porkchop and steak were too prominent in the game to remove them entirely.

5278342 so what just have the programmers input a new flavor?

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