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Cheezman75


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392145 It's a screwed up dream sequence from Rainbow Dash's point of view. Fun, isn't it? :pinkiecrazy:

392213 Firefly is a G1 pony, who was originally suppose to be the original design for R ainbow Dash.
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392213 That would be part of the FIMFiction April Fool's joke. The ponies' names are replaced by their Generation One counterparts.

R ainbow Dash is Firefly :rainbowkiss:
R arity is Sparkler :raritywink:
P inkie Pie is Surprise :pinkiehappy:
F luttershy is Posey. :yay:

To turn it back to normal, scroll to the bottom of the page and click "Toggle G1 Mode." This should also replace the Comic Sans font with something easier on your eyes.

Hi me and my friends tried to do a read though of your first chapter and did a ok I guess job of it sorry if it is not as professionally done as it could have been but we are learning to get better so enjoy the first chapter read though :derpytongue2:
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well that certainly explains it.:rainbowlaugh: i thought Rainbow Dash's vocabulary near the beginning (her thoughts mostly) was a bit out of character, unless of course she's hiding something of her personality.:rainbowhuh: nice story though, can't wait to see the rest.:rainbowwild:

407098 As far as Dramatic Readings go, this was great. The narrator could be more articulate, and there were some audio issues, but besides that, it still had me laughing.:rainbowlaugh:

I just can't wait to see you guys go through the next chapter. :pinkiecrazy:

407235 I suppose it is a bit strange to have Rainbow Dash sound so articulate; it just never occurred to me to change my style when writing from a different point of view. I'm glad to hear you like the story, though. :twilightsmile: Once I get over my writer's block, more should be on the way.

409016 yes me and alfie/emily will continue the story after the 1 week holiday since ill be at his i wont have my recording software to use :ajbemused: but what i am going to do is upload all the pony fiction i have read and post an episode of it each day, the latest ones i have read are This one time in ponyville which was funny to read and back to earth and since reading them my voice acting and the way i record has improved same as alfie will use better mic so not so many audio issues and emily and i will do voices more for the characters but sadly it will be a week until i get to record the next part of this story :fluttercry: but i will read though with alfie and emily non the less and take in all the comments you have sent so we can do better thanks for making a fun story to read :rainbowlaugh:

411816 Next week, huh? I'll be ready for that. I've already seen some improvement in the last video you sent me, so I bet you'll be amazing at this by then. It's good to hear that I'm entertaining people by doing this; it makes me want to try even harder. :twilightsmile:

420277 Cheezman75 here is the next video of your story hope you like it and the audio is cruddy but better :pinkiehappy: enjoy :derpytongue2:
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452203 Good to see that you've got those mic issues cleared up, audio was much better in this one. Voice acting has improved, Rainbow Dash's rant (starting with "Look, bucknugget") was done beautifully. The three of you seem to be enjoying this, and because of that, I can only hope to bring you more screwed up things in the future. Your reactions serve as a good assessment of me as an author. :pinkiehappy:

Overall, a great video. Have an RBD "so awesome" face as a reward. :rainbowkiss:

453595 Awesome thanks an I'm glad you liked it hopefully Alfie has got his mic worked out so sharp and for me and Emily to get some voice acting going on other then that I'm glad it went well and were looking forward to the next chapters

Haha, ten thousand words!
Anyway, I would like some comments. Feedback would be especially nice. If you have trouble giving feedback, well, I can give some discussion topics to help out.

:rainbowdetermined2: How are you enjoying the story so far? How does it hold up compared to other HiEs?
:rainbowkiss: How do each of these chapters compare to the others in terms of quality and entertainment value?
:rainbowlaugh: Is Incer so much of a god-forsaken Mary Sue that he needs to be killed with fire?

That last one... Heh. Anyway, the next chapter is going to a very strange place, so when that goes up, you'd best check your sanity at the entrance. :pinkiecrazy:

795260 I know, right? But never fear, for I am here to corrupt her, much like any other upstanding fanfic author would!
...Oh god what have I done. :twilightoops:

799405
What u have done is insert maturity into an immature mind. Thus you hath creatith puberty or if thy preferith, heat.

799605 We are not sure if thine Olde English is completely accurate, but we have indeed been made aware of the nature of the creature which hath been inflicted upon our fair readers! We thank thee for thy wisdom which thou hast skilfully demonstrated in the current discussion!

...Wow. I should probably just stick to contemporary English. :twilightsheepish: And to think, my character is going to have to adapt to working with... Whatever the hell I just turned Pinkie into. It scares me to even think about it. :fluttershyouch: Will Incer survive Chapter 4 with his sanity intact? I have no idea! :pinkiecrazy:

On the contrary my dear fellow. The, and I use the word losely, correct way does not exist. It is merely a common point set by the society at large! Many different individuals have their own way of speaking. No way is the correct way, it is only correct to the individual labeling it so. *takes a sip of tea*
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799980 'Twas very well spoken, good sir. So well, in fact, that my own self was unable to contain the scale of class that was located within said post, and was immediately overcome by its desire to brew some tea of its own. It can be agreed upon that language is a versatile apparatus that is capable of adaptation for many various circumstances, and that such adaptation is necessary for a language's survival. Language, both written and spoken, must continually evolve if 'tis to remain healthy long after its time, hence why your own points are indeed valid. 'Twould be the work of an elitist to say otherwise.

Now, time to get my tea. I must imbibe it if I am to absorb the essence of... the sir.

800233
Duuude, that is a really deep vibe brah. It puts me so much in sinc with the world maan. Such a display of righteousness, deserves a brohoof brah. Keep ridin those narly waves of life maaan. *holds up hoof expectantly*

800304 I... have no idea how to respond to that. But still,
/)*(\ (bro-hoof!)

800351
Ahhhhh. Another confused costumer. I love my job.:pinkiecrazy:

800412
I'm glad u asked. Welcome to Chained Chaos! Is ur day normal or boring?
If so than u are entitled to a fun bout of randomness by yours truly! I have banters, dancing, memes, jokes, crazyness, and whatever else tickles your funny bone!

WARNNING: Side effects may include; snorts, chuckles, giggles, uncontrollable laughter, side pains, cramping, head shaking, smiles, and possibly insanity! If any of these ensue and are unwanted, please see your local downer.

800489 Well, I had my sanity surgically removed last year, and the other side effects seem manageable, so I should ask, do you do birthday parties?

800558
In fact I recently hired a mare who specializes in such things, a one Pinkie Pie.

:pinkiegasp:*gasp* Did some one say party!? OMG I love parties! WhositforWheredotheyliveWhat-mmmffmffm*puts hoof in mouth*

Does that help answer your question?

mmmmfff mmmffmfmm mff mmmmffm

Pinkie why don't u go manage the party supplies.

mmmffmmf!*bounces away*

...gotta love that mare!!:pinkiecrazy:

800637 Ah, I remember now. She was recently assigned to your firm for community service as punishment for distorting the fabric of reality. She's still at it, I see, because I saw your comment go up about 30 seconds before the notification came in. But she is forgiven, because, well, who doesn't love Pinkie? Aside from people who are deathly afraid of her, I mean.

800713
Yah man people like that are bad for business, always slandering my store saying it's made by Discord himself...ugggh it frustrates me!:flutterrage: I even got sued a couple of times!!!

800764 It's a harsh legal world we live in, isn't it? Anyway, I heard that Pinkie's sales commissions and other things related to job performance can work towards some sort of a parole for her. I can't help but feel sorry for her, so how about I help take some time off of her sentence?

I have a birthday coming up later this week, and I'll be spending most of it in front of my computer screen. Said computer screen has an easily breachable fourth wall, which Pinkie can climb through to wish me a happy birthday. How's that for some business?

And in other news, I have just finished an entire litre of tea (Or "quart" if you prefer that system).

800823
Ssssshhhh!*whispering* Keep your voice down, I don't want Pinkie to know yet. Im still cleaning up from when she learned she was working here.

What was that?

Nothing Pinkie..uhh just make some cupcakes for our lunch break please.

Okie dokie lokie!

Phew that was close I'll tell her later. Anyways happy early birthday!! My gift to u is one Pinkie Pie! Don't worry about payment it's on the house!

800887 Thanks for the wishes and the gifts, but I insist that I should do something in return.

...I'm thinking something related to the story. I've already got the opening to Chapter 4 planned out. It will involve Pinkie Pie causing some... "well-intentioned chaos." :pinkiehappy:

800965 Tastes just like a strawberry-flavoured marshmallow on a cold winter's night.

And as an added bonus, her horribly written innocence will continue, and it will be hilarious!

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