Haha, ten thousand words!
Anyway, I would like some comments. Feedback would be especially nice. If you have trouble giving feedback, well, I can give some discussion topics to help out.

How are you enjoying the story so far? How does it hold up compared to other HiEs?
How do each of these chapters compare to the others in terms of quality and entertainment value?
Is Incer so much of a god-forsaken Mary Sue that he needs to be killed with fire?

That last one... Heh. Anyway, the next chapter is going to a very strange place, so when that goes up, you'd best check your sanity at the entrance.