Rookwood, a magically stunted unicorn, has the greatest wet dream he's ever had. Little does he know his adolescent fantasies may flood Equestria with nightmares.
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That is one of the nicest compliments ever.
Thanks.
“You are young and foolish and immature!” Luna snapped. “You do not understand the unspeakable agonies of watching time pass while being trapped outside of it.”
I tend to disagree, he already said that immortality scared the piss out of him, so he has an inkling of what he is saying, immortality, the greatest curse anyone can bare... Anyway, great chapter and I hope you update soon :)
I wish I didn't read so dang fast! That way, maybe this would be done before I got all caught up! Waiting for each chapter is depressing, cause I always know I'll finish it in an hour, tops.
But don't feel bad. It's the same way with something that's like, say, Background Pony. I read a 37,000 word chapter in about 40 minutes.
Great work on this, still, by the way. It keeps getting better!
well sir your chapter update speed is most impressive and i feel that this chapter flowed alot better then before. it gave much more detailes about rockwoods life and family focusing on the plot is important but only progressing the plot makes for a dull story regardless of how good or popular the idea is. just saying. like i guess an example here would be the main plot is him learning magic anything with nightmare and the foal. so why not delve into parts about his maturity as you have. or possibly have him and luna do a little date despite her saying it was past that point it would still be funny and help build their relationship even more. i got a bunch of other ideas if you want them but this is all just my suggestions take them as you will.
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I had already planned something along those lines.
Hearth's Warming Eve is coming you know.
Breakfast with parents, Hearth's Warming, and then a surprise.
4228342 well then i guess thats good if you want to hear some of my other ideas (idk why im getting so many for this fic) feel free to message me even better if you skype ;) and i will look forward to the next chapter ;)
I love Luna
Oh I'm dying, you did it kudz, you hit #3 on my leaderboard of funniest authors, laughter is a beautiful thing.
Luna mussed opportunity for plowing joke