Rookwood, a magically stunted unicorn, has the greatest wet dream he's ever had. Little does he know his adolescent fantasies may flood Equestria with nightmares.
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It has, in a way. It has reached the end of the first act.
I'm glad a feeling of ending was achieved. I wanted a sense of finality. Thank you.
You've more than got my attention. I loved the first act. You threw me off a couple of times, but what helped me get back on track was actually watching The Crow and re-reading the comics again. That helped me. It made me understand what was going on. That said, I'm going to read this thing completely. You've got my attention, and you've got a loyal reader.
- LF
lol you've managed to keep me so far so i wouldnt be surprised if you hadnt lost too many readers
To be honest this chapter was kinda sad: imagine the one you love turning into the thing that scares you most, not to mention knowing he did it willingly. It kind of seems like there's nothing left of Rookwood, and....well...yeah.
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Luna is always going on and on about facing your fears to other ponies.
Sad as it might be, Rookwood chose this fate.
4260763 He turned into the darkness that Luna fears because he had no choice really, and he knows that Luna can conquer her fear of the darkness. Rookwood has faith in Luna, that is essentially what I am saying.
Well, i'm certainly not going to leave. This story is too good to just quit cold turkey.
4261029 Y'know, that actually makes a lot of sense. It still seems like the original Rookwood has been somewhat purged though, which is sad.
4261090 Well I feel that Rookwood is still Rookwood, he was just forced to mature (being exposed to extreme pain, suffering, and moral darkness tends to rip away any innocence one may have, leaving raw psychological wounds that force you to mature to mend them). Though that kind of maturation would result in a damaged psyche fraught with character failings and the like. When war vets that have been in the bloodiest hellholes of war come home, they often sequester themselves from society and live a lonely and psychologically damaged life.
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There is also all of the tortures down in the black pits to find the measure of his soul. And the price paid for Luna's boon.
Just sayin'.
Almost every path through the darkness leads to a brighter ending
Well.
This seems to be the last point to turn back.
...
I think I can endure this. Hopefully.
About Rookwood in this chapter: he reminds me of Dr. Manhattan, he lost his body as well and regained it - with all those godly powers.
Welp, I said my part. Let's continue.
-Zeph
"The moon now literally shone out of Luna’s ass."
Puns are only good when the're funny... I pissed myself laughing.
4261397 Got to have an ugly to make a beautiful.
It is said it is always darkest before the dawn. Luna deserves that sunrise so damn much.
Unto the breeches and let us dwell deeper.