Rookwood, a magically stunted unicorn, has the greatest wet dream he's ever had. Little does he know his adolescent fantasies may flood Equestria with nightmares.
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Might want to capitalize that second "I". Interesting to see you working the horror angle rather than just resorting to shock tactics, there aren't much decent examples of that around nowdays.
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And horror is in the details. There are a lot of little clues as to what is going on.
good chapter, maybe not a happy one but definitely a less disturbing one
Hm.
I'm waiting for the moment of redemption.
I hope it is not in vain.
-Zeph
Interestingly I feel there will be a distinct lack if fire and brimstone. Revenge will likely be cold....
A very insidious turn from the tale of a love struck colt into a deep dark horror. You've managed to maintain my interest where the genre would be an instant turn off.
Hmmmm... Rookwook is losing himself to the Darkness and Violet is slowly healing and becoming more real. If I was to take a wild guess I would say that she is feeding off of what is left of the world of light in his body. Nightmare Moon's plan for her was two fold. She was to upset them, show them what she was truly capable of, and then she was to help Rookwood turn to the darkness. Become a creature of the night so completely that not even Luna could reach him. To only have the few sparks of decency left in him that all beings have, and then she could give him ample reason to cast them off. He could become a twisted version of his former self. A dark self indulgent version that feeds on fear.
Oh Nightmare Moon you little Minx, I see your plan. It's quite clever. I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes. I really am, and I'm also looking forward to seeing what kinds of hell is going to be released.
Fantastic story so far.
LF
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