Rookwood, a magically stunted unicorn, has the greatest wet dream he's ever had. Little does he know his adolescent fantasies may flood Equestria with nightmares.
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This kinda fits the story.
I'm starting to get annoyed with rookwood and his whole supposed high moral ground stance at waxing moon, it appears that waxing moon was in the same spot as rookwood in the beginning perhaps even worse, but instead of having a big ass change of luck like rook and got a princess pregnant he appeared to been in a terrible situation all this time which caused desperation to escape it even by siding with nightmare moon who probably caused some of those problems to "encourage" him.
and yes while rape is a terrible crime he does seem generally remorseful for it, but while the torture isn't the main problem, the glee that rook and luna have when it comes to it comes off quite hypocritical as they should feel none of that for punishing him for his crimes. In the end i say give the character some more work as you can make him into a good main, secondary, or supporting character.
Hm. Interesting. I have a faint feeling of something terrible that will eventually but surely happen to Rookwood.
Being put in power is a great responsibility... and sometimes it is too much to comprehend.
Nevertheless, the story goes well.
I wonder, though. What did Hades mean with that thing about Luna's foal?
Hm. Guess we will see eventually.
-Zeph
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If you are uncomfortable, then I have done my job.
A little bit of elaboration.
What happened to Violet was no simple act of necromancy. It was a new and previously unseen act of magic that even immortals thought impossible. What Violet suffered through while alive and dead is almost impossible to describe in a brief summary. She was corrupted beyond measure while still alive, and then physically pulled into the dream realms where her soul was corrupted, flayed apart, and Rookwood (and others) shared in that moment of corruption. More details about Violet will come in time. I don't want to spoil anything, but Violet's creation opened doors. And I'll leave it at that. War brewing, dark powers playing one another for dominance, etc.
Inspite of this, Rookwood does indeed show mercy.
What he is doing is only punishment of the flesh. In the dark pits, the tormentors carve apart the psyche. They carve into the soul. Which is much, much worse than punishments of the flesh. It is something of a Grecian concept, mixed with a few other bits of mythology.
Just wait till I get to the part about the giant wicker pony!
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Rookwood and Luna's foal is going to be a sweet innocent little angel. Hades is probably just overreacting.
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'Sweet little innocent angel'.
Knowing how you twist words, I think this means a horrid hellspawn with shadow tentacles and such.... hidden in a cute little filly's disguise.
-_-
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In the right conditions we are all monster in human disguise, although probably the little filly will be a more...practical approach to this philosophy
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She might be a little precocious.
But she will not be a monster.
She'll certainly relieve Hades boredom!
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Well, if you put it that way...
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Okay, surprise me then!
...
What have I done...
4315818 dost thou meant fallen angel? by chance?
hehe
Oh tender generosity given to us in unknown qualities...