Rookwood, a magically stunted unicorn, has the greatest wet dream he's ever had. Little does he know his adolescent fantasies may flood Equestria with nightmares.
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Holy shit. This is pretty fucked...
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I see what you meant when you said you were wary about posting this one. I dunno....it definitely pushes the boundaries of good taste, but I think it definitely fits into the story and adds a new dimension of sadism to the antagonist. I'll keep reading this at any rate, you haven't lost an audience member here.
ok ok ok ok ok ok .... dafaq! now that i have said that i shall get to my commenting. thats despite the dark was good. it defiantly drove home the point that nightmare is not some half assed villan but she really means what she says. and despite my own hatred for her for messing with children of any kind. i can see this continuing and look forward to another chapter.
...Well, you really know how to make a villain, I'll give you that. This chapter was disturbing on a lot of levels.
Welp. I didn't need that sleep tonight. Yeah, my mind is definitely not to be let free to sleep tonight. I never thought i'd read something that topped Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons' one chapter (those that've read it, know what i mean), but this beat it, in roughly a third the wordcount.
On a side note, there's now a third type of nightmare fuel. Regular nightmare fuel, high-octane nightmare fuel, and spaceship-engine class nightmare fuel. This firmly sits in the latter one. I'm not going to stop reading, because i'm far to invested now in wanting to see Nightmare destroyed.
Jeez...and I thought my story was going to dark places. Well done, sir! This is truly a spectacle of the macabre!
This would be where my mary-sue of a OC, Flare Pyros, would show up and literally obliterate the very essence of Nightmare Moon, painfully I might add, and then go on to heal the damage done by her, he is the Darkness, and every aspect of it obeys him, and this is one of the few things that he will interfere with even though normally he leaves things alone. Something this sick would provoke the father in him and he would as any father would, protect the child.
Now that I have said that, it was dark, and disturbing, but if this is where the story goes than this is where it goes, may Flare watch your path for you walk a dangerous one. Also I almost lost my dinner after reading that...
Also this would be where Moonlit would loose his lunch, but still stand ready after regaining some control
This...this has got my attention and my admiration. Please do go on, i wish to see how this develops.
i. . . i . . . erm . . . yeesh . . . . . . . . . . i thought. . . i thought that i was strong to darkness. . . that i could see most every gory scene and laugh. . . . . this is . . . this is plain nasty and downright cruel. . . . . . . i hope . . . i hope that the child can be saved. . . . . .
. . . . this is a completely different level of darkness. . . . . . . . . than what i have even heard of. . .
. . . this chapter is definitely nightmare fuel. . . . .
. . . brain bleach will not be enough to remove this from my mind. . . . i need three liters of 190-proof vodka and lots of time to drink it all. . .
but to be perfectly clear, i am 100% determined to see this through. that . . . that FREAK . . . must pay for her crimes, no holds barred, and no (evil) shadows left un-eradicated.
Praise the guy who copied the horrid part of these last scenes, spoiling it for me so I could skip it.
4247025
THANK YOU!!!
And now, about this chapter....
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No, I'm not going to say anythng.
Let the lack of my words represent the emptiness I feel.
-Zeph
Well, the whole first half I was like, "dark? I don't see any....Ah, well tits..."
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Wow. This did indeed get dark, and yes, I believe you are right. Pinhead and the other cenobites would be proud. I love that the entire thing was set up in such a way to show how a peaceful and wondrous scene. It was beautiful, and touching. Then witnessing the terror both Luna and Rookwood faced. The terror, the humiliation, the mutilation, and the rape... It was dark, and for the kind of story you are trying to tell I would dare say it was glorious. This form of pain, this form of torture is a very old tactic. It's also one of the best ones in existence. Hurting those someone is sworn to protect in order to get to them is a bold move.
I want to see more. You've presented us with the Lament Configuration, and I feel that I must solve it. After all, what good is it to skirt around on the outside of what could be when we can dive into the realm of what will come to be.
Good job, and I look forward to seeing more.
4247504 thank you for what??
4248257
The spoiler.
As I wrote in my comment.
It seems you did not read it.
4248342 I did read it, but apparently I missed part of it, so You're Welcome
well i honestly had to skip over the super dark part before i went to go hang myself, which i was genuinely considering. job well done!
That was beautiful. It put a smile on my face and it didn't even have to use a knife to do it.
I look forward to seeing what the Nightmare does to up the ante. Five quatloos on possessing parents to do it for keeps! Theres a two for one (or better!) right there.
I didn't know reading could almost make me lose my breakfast.
To be perfectly honest I did not know that you were capable of writing something as dark as this.
I am not appalled, I do not feel any different, I am just slightly confused.
I am quite a "dark" person myself, but after reading your "princess luna's suicide solutions" with the ton of adorable foals, this here is something different.
I'm not sure whether to congratulate you on your diverse personality or be amazed/disgusted that you have managed to put such a dark side of life down in words :P
Ah well, congratulating it is :P
Yes!
Then I get to the end.
sweet fuck Nightmare Moon is evil
WHY NIGHTMARE WHY?
... The feels..