Rest in Peace

Sweetiebelle suffers a loss and isnt sure how to deal with this tragedy.

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Heart in a locket

Heart in a locket #1 · Apr 10th, 2014 · 1 · ·

EverfreeDemon

EverfreeDemon #2 · Apr 10th, 2014 · · ·

4211516 Glad you liked it

The truthful dashy

The truthful dashy #3 · Apr 10th, 2014 · 1 · ·

It's rare that a story makes me cry, it's really good

EverfreeDemon

EverfreeDemon #4 · Apr 10th, 2014 · · ·

4214321 Thanks for the support I really appreciate it.

The truthful dashy

The truthful dashy #5 · Apr 10th, 2014 · · ·

4214358 Its a truthfully motivating story

EverfreeDemon

EverfreeDemon #6 · Apr 11th, 2014 · · ·

4214370 I try

Poppyman65

Poppyman65 #7 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · ·

Nice I like it But I still did not cry but I might if I least someone in real life maybe only time will tell

Gadgetphile

Gadgetphile #8 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · ·

I couldn't feel anything for this story. I was too bothered by the spelling mistakes. Nevertheless you'll get a fav.

EverfreeDemon

EverfreeDemon #9 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · ·

4222815 Ohboy the word document betrayed me where did i fuck up?

SilentBelle

SilentBelle #10 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · ·

Hmm, this story didn't do much for me, unfortunately. I feel as though the only emotion in this fic is drawn and inferred pretty much directly from the show. There's no time spent getting into SB's headspace for the tragic event to hold any weight for me as a reader.

Also, there's one part where (I think it was Twilight's eulogy) the paragraph starts with quotation marks when it shouldn't.

EverfreeDemon