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Keepsakes

Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria, there lived a wise and regal Princess who knew many strange and secret things, but the Princess had nopony to pass on her great knowledge to. So she chose a young and clever unicorn to be her faithful student.

Four-part miniseries.

Chapters (2)

Part I - Enslavement · 27th Feb 2014 · 3,440 words
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Part II - Harmony · 6th Mar 2014 · 4,738 words
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Mr Marshmallow

Mr Marshmallow #1 · Feb 27th, 2014 · · · Part I - Enslavement ·

Fantastic plot and beautifully written

Clocklike

Clocklike #2 · Feb 27th, 2014 · · · Part I - Enslavement ·

A nice read so far.

I find your writing too good for people to just avoid it like the stinking corpse of a rat in the middle of the street.

defunct321

defunct321 #3 · Feb 27th, 2014 · · · Part I - Enslavement ·

Sombra had been a gangly filly, which was something of a problem

Sombra had been a gangly colt which was something of a problem

Filly is a girl pony. Other than that small mistake though, this is amazing. Could you just confirm whether or not Sombra was born with curved horn? It's implied that he doesn't, since no one made a fuss over it, but confirming it would be nice.

Masterdramon