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Derpy Hooves loses her job, her bits, now she's losing her home. She tries to find help from the ponies around town, but if that fails, she'll have to find a new alternative.

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i forgor

i forgor #1 · Sep 18th, 2021 · · ·

Future tense is used way too much and also way too wrongly, often in place of past tense which would do it right. Still, it's a good concept of a story.
If you need editing help tell me about it