Oh my god. You are one of the few people who have actually used the correct name for a male sex demon. Most people use the name succubus for both male and female.
4396602 Rly? I never noticed that before 4396678 Thank you. And since when did google docs import the comments aswell? That never happened to me before. Thanks for pointing it out
I am really in love with this right now....and it may sound wrong but why wasnt twilight and the CMC clopping to that amazing sex show? Ok off of that and to the voting the chapter should be a 2 part thing with the CMC nice and grown up (scoots with double D's) and they bring back this bad ass to give them what they wanted all those years ago
Okay, Asmodeus has officially reached the top of my list of personal heroes . Well, he's up there anyway. And I think I found the perfect song for him.
4398631 Alright, I'll be sure to keep that it mind. So would you mind if I messaged you at some point in the future when I'm planning/writing some of the sequels to make sure I got my facts straight?
I wonder if his lesson will include how two mares have sex since he has both Zecora and Twilight there who can demonstrate for the CMC. (Give them a thorough education on the subject)
4396869 Because it was purely educational. But in all honesty, having the CMC clop themselves would be foalcon, which is something I really don't want to write. Also, it means this story will have to be taken of EQAD, which is another thing I don't want to happen. As for Twilight, she was to busy taking notes. Next, double D's? This is not an anthro fic, but that is another idea for a future bonus chapter that I wouldn't mind writing at some point, so thanks for that. 44018414396941 Thank you, good to know I'm doing something right 4397279 Good to know someone thinks so highly of him. And wow, that song is actually really awesome. If the guy wasn't so creepy-as-fuck, it would be even better. But as far as the lyrics go, wow. Honestly thanks for showing me that, I'll prob put that in the authors notes for next chapter just for the lols. 4397532 Thank you, I'll fix all those when I get access to a computer again, I'm typing this on my phone at the moment.
no sleep for three days I REGRAT NOTHING!! And im going for a forth day!! Anyway sorry for my insantiy ignore what i said....hey will cadance fuck the badass?...
no she wount you dipshit she is still married to shining tjere is no way she is going to cheat on him.
Plz dont hit me im sorry!
No you are getting it this time come here!! *shadow runs after wolf* this is what happens when you go this long without sleep!
This chapter was just... Yes. Yes to the fullest extent of the word. If there are any clop stories that have this situation (cmc watching people fuck), then send them to me. ILL TAKE THEM ALL!
4454868 incubi are the same way except to fit the reversed gender thing. Also, I realize that about the fic. In fact I encourage that much. I almost wanna use asmodeus and the succubus I forgot the name of in a fanfic I've been planning. Even if just to be referenced.
44548684455533 Asmodeus and the other succubi/incubi in this fic's canon do not have the ability to steal a ponies soul under a normal summoning as that usually is not what the pony wants, go back to the first chapter "I bing you to my will, accept or be banished" I don't think a lot.of ponies would want their soul stolen. And usually, I probably should have said this in the story, there is a back and forth between the summoner and the demon as to what the deal entails. Asmodeus was willing to give all the power to Twilight because he knew that nothing bad could really harm him, and seeing as he is an archdemon he has some special privileges in a summoning over a normal demon, namely that the orders given to him are really just suggestions.
However, that does not mean some rogue succubi who happened to escape from Tartarus couldn't go around and steal some souls if they wanted to, but doing so would bring down the wrath of everyone else. Part of the deal made with Celestia for the demons to return to Tartarus was that demons couldn't steal an unwilling soul. And I know this deal sounds one sided, but in all honesty Celestia and Luna really were bargaining from a position of "either you accept this, or we will forcibly banish you very painfully" and the demon's didn't have a chance of fighting them. I'm going to go a bit deeper on this in the sequels, so yea.
But if a demon turned a pony into a love slave, thta s not stealing a soul is it? I haven't said it in the story yet, but theajority of demons are not as nice as Asmodeus is, this is due primarily to his relationship with Celestia and Luna, which I might elaborate on in a sequel, but if I do it will have a heavy amount of headcanon which some people will of course disagree with because they think that my story should have their headcanon in it.
4455852 ... You done? I very much understand your story's canon, I just wanted to say that little bit about the nature of real Succubi and incubi. Also... Is asmodeus the actual name of the arch demon Incubus?
Oh my god. You are one of the few people who have actually used the correct name for a male sex demon. Most people use the name succubus for both male and female.
There appears to be a section at the end that was intended to be a note for your editor or to yourself.
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Rly? I never noticed that before
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Thank you. And since when did google docs import the comments aswell? That never happened to me before. Thanks for pointing it out
I am really in love with this right now....and it may sound wrong but why wasnt twilight and the CMC clopping to that amazing sex show? Ok off of that and to the voting
the chapter should be a 2 part thing with the CMC nice and grown up (scoots with double D's) and they bring back this bad ass to give them what they wanted all those years ago
jajjajaja! the kid's reactions kill me! good chapter!
Asmodeus: 1
Cadence: 0
Okay, Asmodeus has officially reached the top of my list of personal heroes . Well, he's up there anyway. And I think I found the perfect song for him.
LOL, this chapter was hilarious. Everything from Candance to the CMC was great.
There were several small grammatical/spelling errors.
I'm should be capitalized
same thing. Also happens twice in the author's note.
there
extra she
that
That's all I noticed.
4396693 Yep it's true, I am somewhat of a demonologist.
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Alright, I'll be sure to keep that it mind. So would you mind if I messaged you at some point in the future when I'm planning/writing some of the sequels to make sure I got my facts straight?
I wonder if his lesson will include how two mares have sex since he has both Zecora and Twilight there who can demonstrate for the CMC. (Give them a thorough education on the subject)
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*whispers* sequels
wow...that was very hot. Keep up the amazing work!
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Because it was purely educational. But in all honesty, having the CMC clop themselves would be foalcon, which is something I really don't want to write. Also, it means this story will have to be taken of EQAD, which is another thing I don't want to happen. As for Twilight, she was to busy taking notes. Next, double D's? This is not an anthro fic, but that is another idea for a future bonus chapter that I wouldn't mind writing at some point, so thanks for that.
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Thank you, good to know I'm doing something right
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Good to know someone thinks so highly of him. And wow, that song is actually really awesome. If the guy wasn't so creepy-as-fuck, it would be even better. But as far as the lyrics go, wow. Honestly thanks for showing me that, I'll prob put that in the authors notes for next chapter just for the lols.
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Thank you, I'll fix all those when I get access to a computer again, I'm typing this on my phone at the moment.
no sleep for three days I REGRAT NOTHING!! And im going for a forth day!! Anyway sorry for my insantiy ignore what i said....hey will cadance fuck the badass?...
no she wount you dipshit she is still married to shining tjere is no way she is going to cheat on him.
Plz dont hit me im sorry!
No you are getting it this time come here!!
*shadow runs after wolf* this is what happens when you go this long without sleep!
YESYESYEYESYESYESYES! Now do the anal chap pls. Not enough Zecora fucking
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That will be in one of the sequels, I want to keep things moving towards the finish in this story.
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I never said that all of Asmodeus' subjects are all as nice as him, there are some that do that.
I wish that we had someone that was as open-minded as Asmodeus when it comes to sex ed.....Well done.....
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I use the word fuck in this story, thats just Twilight's dialogue which is why I used 'buck' instead
This chapter was just... Yes. Yes to the fullest extent of the word. If there are any clop stories that have this situation (cmc watching people fuck), then send them to me. ILL TAKE THEM ALL!
4454868 incubi are the same way except to fit the reversed gender thing. Also, I realize that about the fic. In fact I encourage that much. I almost wanna use asmodeus and the succubus I forgot the name of in a fanfic I've been planning. Even if just to be referenced.
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Asmodeus and the other succubi/incubi in this fic's canon do not have the ability to steal a ponies soul under a normal summoning as that usually is not what the pony wants, go back to the first chapter "I bing you to my will, accept or be banished" I don't think a lot.of ponies would want their soul stolen. And usually, I probably should have said this in the story, there is a back and forth between the summoner and the demon as to what the deal entails. Asmodeus was willing to give all the power to Twilight because he knew that nothing bad could really harm him, and seeing as he is an archdemon he has some special privileges in a summoning over a normal demon, namely that the orders given to him are really just suggestions.
However, that does not mean some rogue succubi who happened to escape from Tartarus couldn't go around and steal some souls if they wanted to, but doing so would bring down the wrath of everyone else. Part of the deal made with Celestia for the demons to return to Tartarus was that demons couldn't steal an unwilling soul. And I know this deal sounds one sided, but in all honesty Celestia and Luna really were bargaining from a position of "either you accept this, or we will forcibly banish you very painfully" and the demon's didn't have a chance of fighting them. I'm going to go a bit deeper on this in the sequels, so yea.
But if a demon turned a pony into a love slave, thta s not stealing a soul is it? I haven't said it in the story yet, but theajority of demons are not as nice as Asmodeus is, this is due primarily to his relationship with Celestia and Luna, which I might elaborate on in a sequel, but if I do it will have a heavy amount of headcanon which some people will of course disagree with because they think that my story should have their headcanon in it.
4455852 ... You done? I very much understand your story's canon, I just wanted to say that little bit about the nature of real Succubi and incubi. Also... Is asmodeus the actual name of the arch demon Incubus?
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Yea I'm done, I just wanted to make clear where this story stood. And as far as I know Asmodeus is the name of the "real" lord of lust.
4456114 cool! (I'm obsessed with angelic and demonic lore)
And you turn this down Twilight? Call up AJ and have them put you in an Earth Pony man-sandwich!
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Good guy Asmodeus. Sees suc/incubi foalconning, works hard to remove that taint.
Wha? Apple Bloom lives on a farm. With pigs and cows. There is no possible way she doesn't know how sex works.
Quick question re-reading this, is that the flask that is used by twily to see into the past in the show? is that why the fluid was white?
Well, are they making slurping noises or not?
Oh, wait... I thought you were talking about succ.