But that aside this story is amazing, Actual character development and and nice slice of life story thrown in with the clop is something i rarely find. i'm reminded of xenophilia when i read this because there is a world here that goes beyond the bedroom, and that make what happens in the bedroom even better because of context.
4251370 There will be about as much yaoi in part b as there was in the first bonus chapter, I really won't be able to write more hardcore yaoi than that as I'm straight, so it just doesn't speak to my tastes. So the original scene will be changed slightly to accommodate. I'm just telling you so you get the whole picture. 4251379 Well, I can check 'compared to xenophilia' of my bucket list now. I don't think this story is nearly as good as that, but I really do appreciate the compliment.
3 things: 1 yaaaay an update 2 nothing against vinyl but i think hardwell could teach her a thing or 2 and 3 that in the hall of the mountain king techno remix ive had faved since like forever nice to see it pop up in a story
Option A. And I really dig this chapter. I was even sort of hoping there wasn't any sex the more I read. It was a nice, sweet moment for Vinyl and Octavia. It's nice to see a couple of ponies I'm a fan of both have a good day. Very well written. :)
4251699 Don't worry, both of them will happen eventually 4251847 Yea, sorry about my music choice for Vinyl. I'm a cellist myself so my knowledge of classical music is alot more in depth than my dubstep And yes, that Hall of the Mountain King remix is fucking awesome 4264208 Neither will have Yaoi in the real guy-on-guy action sense, the strongest it will get is the same as in the bonus chapter, which really isn't yaoi, and if it is its pretty damn light yaoi. So if you could give me an A or B it would be a bit more useful than "both" 4270031 I know I know, I hate cliffhangers as well. But that was just a good breaking spot so I could get the chapter out, I haven't been able to write at all the best couple days so if I didn't end it there the chapter still wouldn't be out. 42514464251460 I apologize for crushing your dreams, And as much as I wish I could cater to the clop tastes of everyone... its just not my thing. But if either of you(anyone) wants to write it I wouldn't care, and I would help you as much as I really could. 4235262 Thanks, Me and Natasha had a pretty fun discussion about all that magic stuff, and good to know someone else thinks its a pretty cool theory! 4254711 trust me, its not that I don't want to write some clop, but I am really trying to put a good story in this fic aswell.
4271320 Honestly, I kinda plan out the other clop scenes, but these bonus ones are just going to happen. I have no idea who's going to end.up fucking who, so it will be a surprise.
4383212 The next chapter is sitting pretty at 7200 words right now with 1200 of that being clop, but the clop scene is like a third of the way done, so another 2500 word or so, but I'm hesitant to say that as I usually end up writing differently than I plan. I may be able to finish it tonight, but if not, definitely by tommorow. I am/was/will be busy with finals and final projects.for the next month, and sadly that does impact my.writing time greatly.
4383341 i really hope its not like the random ones they are great don't get me wrong but i kinda enjoy the base story line a little more...unless the male side meets the other and just has a crazy full blown orgy with everyone
4393979 The chapter that I was supposed to finish yesterday but I fell asleep early instead of finishing it is part of the main story. It's at 8700 word right now, probably 1000-1500 more by the time I'm done. Which should take me anywhere from 1-1.5 hours when I sit down to type it.
I'm still thinking the clop is an extra. I like the story!
I vote for idea A but idea B will have some yaoi in there... that's difficult... please do idea B!!!
option A. Option A like the fist or an angry god.
But that aside this story is amazing, Actual character development and and nice slice of life story thrown in with the clop is something i rarely find. i'm reminded of xenophilia when i read this because there is a world here that goes beyond the bedroom, and that make what happens in the bedroom even better because of context.
4251370
There will be about as much yaoi in part b as there was in the first bonus chapter, I really won't be able to write more hardcore yaoi than that as I'm straight, so it just doesn't speak to my tastes. So the original scene will be changed slightly to accommodate. I'm just telling you so you get the whole picture.
4251379
Well, I can check 'compared to xenophilia' of my bucket list now. I don't think this story is nearly as good as that, but I really do appreciate the compliment.
Silly-ish idea for a C. :R63 Twi, Dash, and AJ, somehow, accidentally summon an Incubus instead of a Sucubus.
I doubt you'd write that though, so A.
4251436 Aw! A girl can always dream, can't I?
fine! doe option A. Just don't make them fuck their mirror counterpart. (that would be too predictable).
RE: Bonus chapter: Can't we have both? Please?
No? Well I vote for option A then, just 'cuz I think it'll be more interesting
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Good chapter was good, more please! (damn your cliffhangers )
3 things: 1 yaaaay an update 2 nothing against vinyl but i think hardwell could teach her a thing or 2 and 3 that in the hall of the mountain king techno remix ive had faved since like forever nice to see it pop up in a story
also this
unicorn’s back then would be
unicorns*
“the unicorn’s weren’t
unicorns*
Both mare’s were, needless
mares*
Option A please.
sexless clopfic is sexless...still awesome
RULE B SUCKAS
4257481
Its an anthro fix, but here is that clopfic you said you wanted.
Option A. And I really dig this chapter. I was even sort of hoping there wasn't any sex the more I read. It was a nice, sweet moment for Vinyl and Octavia. It's nice to see a couple of ponies I'm a fan of both have a good day. Very well written. :)
Both, or whichever one doesn't have yaoi
U end the chapter rite ther?
U bech
4251699
Don't worry, both of them will happen eventually
4251847
Yea, sorry about my music choice for Vinyl. I'm a cellist myself so my knowledge of classical music is alot more in depth than my dubstep And yes, that Hall of the Mountain King remix is fucking awesome
4264208
Neither will have Yaoi in the real guy-on-guy action sense, the strongest it will get is the same as in the bonus chapter, which really isn't yaoi, and if it is its pretty damn light yaoi. So if you could give me an A or B it would be a bit more useful than "both"
4270031
I know I know, I hate cliffhangers as well. But that was just a good breaking spot so I could get the chapter out, I haven't been able to write at all the best couple days so if I didn't end it there the chapter still wouldn't be out.
4251446 4251460
I apologize for crushing your dreams, And as much as I wish I could cater to the clop tastes of everyone... its just not my thing. But if either of you(anyone) wants to write it I wouldn't care, and I would help you as much as I really could.
4235262
Thanks, Me and Natasha had a pretty fun discussion about all that magic stuff, and good to know someone else thinks its a pretty cool theory!
4254711
trust me, its not that I don't want to write some clop, but I am really trying to put a good story in this fic aswell.
4270478 then B pls
4270478 So, they are going to em... fuck theirself in another gender?
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that better would be well write (I like a good write story).
;P
4271320
Honestly, I kinda plan out the other clop scenes, but these bonus ones are just going to happen. I have no idea who's going to end.up fucking who, so it will be a surprise.
You know...still waiting for the update on this sexy clip...unless life is in the way than I'm sorry
pwwwweeeeesssseee can we has more clops?
4383212
The next chapter is sitting pretty at 7200 words right now with 1200 of that being clop, but the clop scene is like a third of the way done, so another 2500 word or so, but I'm hesitant to say that as I usually end up writing differently than I plan. I may be able to finish it tonight, but if not, definitely by tommorow. I am/was/will be busy with finals and final projects.for the next month, and sadly that does impact my.writing time greatly.
4383341 i really hope its not like the random ones they are great don't get me wrong but i kinda enjoy the base story line a little more...unless the male side meets the other and just has a crazy full blown orgy with everyone
anyway sorry for being crazy its kinda my thing
4393979
The chapter that I was supposed to finish yesterday but I fell asleep early instead of finishing it is part of the main story. It's at 8700 word right now, probably 1000-1500 more by the time I'm done. Which should take me anywhere from 1-1.5 hours when I sit down to type it.
B