I think Asmodeus is the good kind of 'Gary Stu' where he uses his OP abilities in the perfect way so its like the perfect fantasy for anyone. So in my opinion don't change anything about him you sexy horse word writer.
3883288 I get what you're saying, but in the interest of having a good plot as well as good plots (heh), I want to make Asmodeus as believable a character as I can. So theres an actual pony behind the sex demon. But don't worry, And, "Sexy horse word writer", i like that.
I'm loving this so much the only word I have for you is "awesome".
I'm really liking Asmodeus. Not sure why, but I like this character, even if he is almost like those alicorn OCs nobody likes. Know what I mean? I guess that is because he has solid reasons for being like he is. Can I hope to see him interact with the princesses? After it was mentioned that he is Celestia's friend I can't get it off my mind!
Anyway... Keep doing what you're doing! It's working!
I know that this is the term for the f-word around here, but still...Apple Bloom should have heard the term "bucking" around the farm, since AJ throws it around all the time in the show while bucking apples. Just sayin'.
Sweet Celestia that was intense. Not to mention hilarious at the appropriate parts. I look forward to the next chapters with immense anticipation.
I think Asmodeus is the good kind of 'Gary Stu' where he uses his OP abilities in the perfect way so its like the perfect fantasy for anyone. So in my opinion don't change anything about him you sexy horse word writer.
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I get what you're saying, but in the interest of having a good plot as well as good plots (heh), I want to make Asmodeus as believable a character as I can. So theres an actual pony behind the sex demon. But don't worry, And, "Sexy horse word writer", i like that.
I'm loving this so much the only word I have for you is "awesome".
I'm really liking Asmodeus. Not sure why, but I like this character, even if he is almost like those alicorn OCs nobody likes. Know what I mean? I guess that is because he has solid reasons for being like he is. Can I hope to see him interact with the princesses? After it was mentioned that he is Celestia's friend I can't get it off my mind!
Anyway... Keep doing what you're doing! It's working!
You amenable to some fixing of typos?
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I'm speechless
I know that this is the term for the f-word around here, but still...Apple Bloom should have heard the term "bucking" around the farm, since AJ throws it around all the time in the show while bucking apples. Just sayin'.
Honestly, I'm just in for the story itself now, not much of the clop.
4235114 Which is why I can never take it seriously when an author uses buck as the colloquial term for fuck.