3884180 Thanks for the comments. And the Princesses are going to make an appearance in part 4, most likely. Depends on how things go. The scene I have planned out for them is something i'm definitely looking forward to writing. And damn straight I'm going to give Spike wings, I don't know why others don't. 3884243 Of course, just tell me where you see them and i'll get right on it. 3884313 Releasing the third chapter was actually an accident. I meant to do it later today, but I clicked publish instead of edit and just decided to roll with it.
So I'm just going to say this now and get it out of the way. Very good story (especially the sex) but there are some grammatical errors that I would love to help you with.
First of all... Daaaaamn!
Second... Thank you for giving Spike wings.
This is Sparity clop done right.
I JUST finished reading the previous chapter and BAM new chapter, time to read!
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Thanks for the comments. And the Princesses are going to make an appearance in part 4, most likely. Depends on how things go. The scene I have planned out for them is something i'm definitely looking forward to writing. And damn straight I'm going to give Spike wings, I don't know why others don't.
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Of course, just tell me where you see them and i'll get right on it.
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Releasing the third chapter was actually an accident. I meant to do it later today, but I clicked publish instead of edit and just decided to roll with it.
I was listening to incubus while reading the description for this story.
This has a dragon seal of aproval
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great job man
That was the BEST interpretation of a teenage Spike that I've ever seen. Well done. Can't wait to read the rest of the story!
Okay, honestly I am not a fan of the ship.....But DAMN, that was beautifully done....
I might just give the ship another chanceSo I'm just going to say this now and get it out of the way. Very good story (especially the sex) but there are some grammatical errors that I would love to help you with.