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Join an airborne pony as he fights his way through D-Day to the Battle of the Bulge. Can he survive through some of the toughest battles of WW2 and make it home alive? Only time and some luck will he find out

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Reminds me of...I believe it was the second Call of Duty game...or maybe the third...?

Anyway, this is pretty good, disregarding the spelling and grammar errors which are easy to fix if you find yourself a good editor.

The story flows nicely and I like how you brought the Mane Six (and Spike) into the story so seamlessly, without much boring explanation.

And I need to say something else too, lol. At first I thought you were mispelling the word "German(s)", but then I realized they were supposed to be "Ger-manes" :rainbowlaugh:

That's clever, bro. Keep it up. Definitely gonna track this bad boy :yay:

Hey, are the Germane's Ponies or Humans in this world?:rainbowlaugh: Either way, this story is good, very good!

I have only one question, though.... Are you going to bring the stories of the rest of the Mane Six in the story? Because Applejack and Spike fighting on Omaha is something I like to read!

Keep it up!
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353972 thanks I'm probably going to add omaha beach in a later chapter and the Germanes are ponies who follow Adhoof Hitler. Please tell other people about this so I can get others opinions on it.:pinkiehappy:

band of brothers based? anyway awesome story please post more. :pinkiehappy:

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354496 I got my ideas of a game called Company of Heroes for PC:eeyup:

354505 ah i see. well you should watch BOB its based on true story of 101st airborne through d-day to battle of bulge, the game is probably based on it.

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354578 Ive seen them all. Its a good series

Well, this is creepy. I have a story that involved all the Mane Six and Spike in the 101st Airborne Division and they fought in a similar experience like your story but the way I see it, it seem like my have more combat or not. I don`t know. If you like the 101st please tell me and we`ll talk about it.

MCA

Awesome story for now. The places are described with great detail, but I think you should slow down the pace a little bit. The main protagonist just going there and killing an entire AA gun crew is just too fast and not detailed enough, but your writing style is just fine. +1

And whike we're at alternate WW2 pony stories, could you help review mine? (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/256918/the-30th-tiger)

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