• Member Since 12th Nov, 2012
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AstralMareets


Hello! My name is Grant. I like ponies a ton and stuff. Praise the Sun!

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You know Vinyl Scratch, right? That loud, energetic, confident, disk jockey who can sometimes be a bit vulgar and outright rude. Stereo typical DJ, clearly. This story explores an alternative personality, one that hides behind music and sunglasses. Read this short story to find her conquer insecurities with the help of a friend, get the guy, and see another possibility of what is behind the veil.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

Can you please indent this? It's a bit too hard to read.

3809045 I'm sorry, I thought I had. I'll reformat straight away. Thanks for speaking up! I think it's just because everything is kind of indented. :twilightblush: I increased the line spacing, hopefully that makes it easier. Could you describe what is hard to read about it? Is it the flow of the story or just hurting you eyes?

3809057 It's just hurting my eyes from seeing it all mashed together. I think that's why there are all those down votes. :pinkiegasp:

Ahh, lame. But thanks for the heads up! Did you like it otherwise? Is the formatting good now?

3809243 It's getting better. Sorry for being picky, but I thought you were going to space the paragraphs. :twilightsheepish:

3809275 Oooh, that's what you wanted. I'll get on that. Thanks for being picky, it's much appreciated. Another thumbs down =( Don't feel motivated to finish the last two chapters. :fluttercry:

3809457 Don't worry. You have my upvote. :raritywink:

:raritycry: CHICKEN NUGGET

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