I'm a male Austrian who lives in Linz, my hobbies are reading books, playing computer games and teasing my sister (just joking :-)) my english is bad but I'm working on it so please be patient
Everypony knows how they where born and how they grew up. But what if its all a lie?
After a young colt moves to ponyville he and a filly have to face reality after it shatters.
Inspirited by the story "Flesh and Blood" made by VideoGamePony
Inspirited by the music "Destabilize" made by princewhateverer
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Good story line so far.
But the oh so many grammar issues makes it almost unreadable. 
3752975 Sorry I was manically
working on the 3rd Chapter and forgot to check the grammar before publishing it 
. I made a quick update it should be better now, if you find something else please PM me.
3754614 Much better
I'll be keeping an eye out for updates!
I'm sorry to be so mean but I opened the first chapter and started reading,
And I instantly thought about reading something else.
Maybe try a different introduction?
3754614
Sorry if I'm being a real @$$hole but it doesn't look lie you even tried fixing the grammar. Perhaps you should get a prof reader? Even I could do it if asked.