• Member Since 14th Feb, 2013
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Name: Max Z. T. Schultz Age: 16 Country: USA Best pony: Rainbow Dash Hey guys, My name is Max, I live in Marion, Ohio. I go to Tri-Rivers Career Center for school.

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vivid description of a rape scene

liked.

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Yeah, but that will come in the next chapter.

All I could think of while reading the description...

A bit off-putting that the story pic is your avatar... self-insert stories are rarely worth reading (even smut.)

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:rainbowlaugh: I was actually thinking about putting this song in the next chapter

i might read this it sounds good man *starts reading*

Done reading love it man she likes her music they way i do nice and LOUD

Nice.

Until I can think of something else to describe it, I'll go with "Nice".

Oh Yeah.

POST ANOTHER CHAPTER, PLEASE :DDD

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I'm sorry guys but the rape scene wont be good. Sorry to inform you, but I didn't think rape would be this hard to explain.

Comment posted by fordoe1 deleted Dec 14th, 2013

How long till next?

Sorry. I liked it, really, it was awesome. Except it was WAY TOO SHORT.

:\ Just Sayin'...

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Yeah, it is gonna be the worst chapter of this fiction, but I really think I can do better next chapter.

3647383 I think so too :D

Keep up the good work

(And P.S. Now I'm not worried of adding technology in Equestria. And that I'm not the only one to write a fic mostly about OCs)

I THOUGHT OF SOMETHING BETTER TO DESCRIBE IT! :D

SuperEpicExtremeAwesomazing xD

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yeah, but I cant write the next chapter for some reason. Stupid writers block.

3670551 Yeah, that happened to me once. That's why I don't have any stories. :P

And because I don't want the Good Grammar Directory to come and be all over it.

They're real.

And that I'm too damn lazy.

What. The. Fudge.

I was scrolling through fanfics and ran into this one (I found it awhile back) but I noticed I disliked it for some reason. I was like WTF or What The Fudge. I liked it again though, so no worries :D

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Okie dokie lokie. :pinkiehappy: Thanks for the like

whens the next chapter to this and pup kind and hated

Please write next chapter quick I lovin the series but it not updated fast enough and you get follow like favorite and 20 mouchstaches
here are the mouchstaches
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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sorry mate, but the next chapter is coming to me slowly. I have no idea what to write for the next chapter. though I am always open to ideas from my readers

3969224 she should wake up in bed in a room across from vinyl and Octavia doin it and walk in on them without them noticicing so they finish and she speaks up then they get embarressd

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well im not to sure Ember would be one to watch :rainbowlaugh:

3976282 well then maybe she should clear her thought when she walks in and they notice and then have threesome
:raritywink::raritywink::raritywink::raritywink::pinkiegasp::twilightblush::facehoof:

3976282 and you should read fallout equestria the original it is in crystals favorites



P.s. I found you through crystalhero97 fallout equestria in his favs

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Dude?! what is it with you wanting my oc's clopped lol... well you may get your wish in this story :twilightblush:

3982670 ok I sorry if you got offended but it all that popped into my mind so um if you no like that maybe she wake up in hospital in ponyville and thunder lane is weeping and the he sees she is a wake and gives her a concussion :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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you know if you want to help write you can always ask :derpytongue2: oh and it is nigh impossible to offend me. *spoiler* there will be clop.... might not e the best but there will be that sort of thing in it :pinkiehappy:

3983338 thanks for the offer on helping but I rally not good and writing so yeah but I can give suggestions and proofread for you if you like

Comment posted by Apple jacks lover deleted Feb 26th, 2014

3995796 no that's ok, :twilightblush: but i'm always open to ideas :pinkiehappy:

Can I help write I realized I can write just fine on a computer
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Of course :pinkiehappy: you can PM me if you like :derpytongue2:

How I pm you tho:applejackunsure::applejackunsure::applejackunsure::applejackunsure::applejackunsure::applejackunsure:and what I say or do I pm you what I write

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pm = private message :pinkiehappy: and its to discuss what story you want to write with me

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go to my profile page and click the envelope by my name

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