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The Confectioner's Conscience

After a secret plan to rekindle the flames of a past romance fails, Donut Joe finds himself trying to cover up the truth about his trip to Ponyville. The problem is that he suspects his secret is already compromised.

[Pretend that the "other" character tag actually says "Donut Joe"]

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Silver Starlight

Silver Starlight #1 · Dec 1st, 2013 · · ·

A couple minor concerns: You switch between Mr. and Carrot Cake, as well as Cup and Mrs. You say "would of" instead of "would have" and I saw "hoofs" at least once, but this was interesting. The grammar is pretty sound, and I've never seen that ship even referenced. Thumbed.

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