My main ships are PinkieDash, PinkieShy, RariTwi, AppleDash, and FlutterDash. I'll post many things, ships, fluff, adventure, and maybe...some clops. If I feel up to it. Love you all! <3
Fluttershy needs Pinkie Pie's help, seeking moral support when an animal friend of hers has fallen ill, and is within its last hour. It's been a while since Fluttershy has had to experience this, and with all their other friends away and busy, she turns to Pinkie Pie for comfort. The pink pony is unsure on how to deal with such a sad thing, but quickly finds a way to cheer up her hurting friend. After all, that's what friends are for, right?
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Actually quite liked this. I personally don't think Pinkie would have the capacity of dealing with a situation like that properly, despite knowing more or less what they're about, but I was sure she'd eventually reach a way to tell Fluttershy what you made her speak more directly. So it's satisfying, in a way. Fluttershy seemed to cheer up and understand what she should do a bit too fast, but I guess that didn't draw back from the experience. It might be just me expecting sadfics to kinda linger on the sad part. xD Other than that, it was nice, short and sweet. Keep up the good work~!
Okay. This was cute and sweet and very intentionally plain/short. This was very nice for a first story. You could spruce it up with some cover art... Add it to a few groups...
I'm not saying this will be a hit because it's not everyone's cup of tea, but it could be decently successful for your first story.
You should try out new styles and genres for your next few stories to get a grasp on writing. I think that with some work, you could be a good asset to this fandom. Lord knows we need some...
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Thank you so much! I know I rushed it a bit...
Sorry for that. but I appreciate your constructive criticism. I'll work on it for future fics! ^-^ I'm glad you enjoyed it. I promise there's more to come! <3
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Thanks for the kind words. I don't expect it to be a huge deal around here like some of the amazing things I've read...but maybe someday I'll write something that will! Thanks for the support, hope you stick around to see the growth! (When it happens!
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Well that was surprisingly good for your first pony fanfiction. If you can keep doing stuff like this, you can bet I'll become a fan of all your work relatively soon.
In regards to the content, it was incredibly well thought out throughout the whole thing. I could actually see Pinkie doing this, and it's a nice touch to see her not being overly childish about the scenario. Way to make your characters more in character than half the authors on this site, including some popular ones.
-SoI
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wow! Thank you so much
This story was touching.. thanks for sharing
Even though I doubt the writers on the show would actually write an episode for a scenario like this (one of Fluttershy's animal friends dying of old age).. I think this is how Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie would approach the situation.
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thanks...yeah, I know the show would never address it, so I thought it'd be fun to write out the scenario if for some reason they ever did. Thanks for the words!
This fic was great for your first story it was very touching in sense of content. I do agree with one of the other comments that the conflict came a little too early and Fluttershy knew what she was supposed to do very early. However, I'm very pleased with this fic and I agree that you will be a good writer if you continue on this path. I hope you start writing shipping fics because I really appreciate these stories. Well done!
Aside from a couple of gramatical issues (you're instead of your), this was excellent. The best fanfics should feel like extensions of the show, and this certainly does.
I liked this one. It actually made my eyes tear up. And it reminded me of when my aunt lost her dog in May this year. I wasn't really that saddened by it, probably because I wasn't there when they put him down. He lived to be 17 years old. We still have one dog left.
Aww... This was beautiful. I didn't think there would be a way to cheer up Flutters, Pinkie surprised me there. And by that I mean you. This was a great, sweet short read.