When Sweetie Belle finds an old mirror in the attic of Carousel boutique, she takes it back to the Cutie Mark Crusaders clubhouse. But a vortex opens from the mirror and suck the Crusaders into it, taking them back in time 2000 years ago! Now the Crusaders must hurry and find a way back to their time before the 13 stars aline, or they'll be trapped in that time forever. Along the way they meet new friends and Babs falls in love with a colt named Sliver Gravel. And the greatest truth is revealed... the origin of the Cutie Mark!
This is really good set up. Also did that god just create Celestia?
3469969 Thanks u, that means a lot to me. That wasn't Celestia 'the voice' created, her name is Astra of the stars. She's the first Alicorn ever
I am liking this so far mate...keep it up
3470096 thank u
3470058 Cool, I probably just wasn't paying as much attention as I should have been, keep up the good work.
Darn these cliffhangers
Pretty cool, Cant wait for more.
3504041 Thank u. I like ur story a lot too. It's really good.
Thank you so much, I am very new to this writing thing. But it's getting easier, I am working on a new chapter.