Ponies have long been at the top of the food chain, but recently it has all changed. The gates of Tartarus are open; normally docile creatures are growing and feeding, and all of Equestria is in turmoil.
I'm the same way. I really don't care for the gore aspect of "hard vore", but I an oddly turned on by hard digestion/absorption into the host.
I guess it just triggers my TF fetish or something. It's like an inanimate TF, but better in every possible way. You are still technically living, but you become stuck in a helpless form that you can't escape from. Your new form is totally indistinguishable from the rest of the host, and you are forced to settle into your new "life" and live like that... forever
4324181 not exactly sure on my reason for it... But this chapter hit at least 3 of my fetishes. Wonder what's going happen with mrs. cake now that she felt the pleasure of unbirthing.
4324181 I can't help but feel as though I inspired you with my Apple TF, but that could just be the shameless promotion talking. Either way, I can't fully enjoy this chapter away from home..
Really great job guys, that was hot as fuck, in a "wish I was absorbed into something even though I'd die" kinda way. Just the way I like my vore stories.
Now that 5S is done with, I forsee many transformations/edible ponies on the horizon!
4324077 If you got a hard on, in any of what you read, then you got more then you think. If not, then this isn't for you. (if your under 12, then you haven't developed fetishes yet, come back later)
No, I wouldn't, because I'm not a misanthropic jerk.
And I am calling bullshit. The characters aren't in-character and acting like they should, these monsters are just popping up randomly out of nowhere, everyone has suddenly dumped their morals, there's no good explanation for ANY of this...it's just a piece of bullshitake mushrooms that pees all over those that care about the fandom. A waste of time, an insult to the source material, poorly conceived and executed.
4326589 4327022 4324173 4323964 hmm, many votes for this idea. I wonder if it'd be too out of character. I would hate for more people to come to a sexual fetish story and tell me the ponies aren't acting like 8 year old girl cartoon characters.
4327401 We are reading this because we WANT them to get eaten bro. Them being out of character makes it easier to do that. (though i do what to slap fluttershy across the mouth. "Natural order! NATURAL ORDER! WELL THEN BITCH YOU BETTER STOP TAKING CARE OF THEM BECAUSE LAST TIME I CHECKED THE NATURAL ORDER, PONIES WEREN'T NATURES MEDICS YOU HYPERCRITICAL CUNT!") but yah.
You can't use the excuse. There's a certain way satire and parody works of you're trying to go for that direction. You have to actually imitate something and then make a point on how dumb it is. If you do a satire, but forget to actually make real points about the thing you're making fun of, you've just mad a bad story...but WORSE.
And I call bullshit on that too, because you should try and create a realistic setting to get that across, not use contrived horse manure to push the point. And you can't tell me this is "satire". As I schooled Kaiden, satire has to actually imitate something and make a point about the thing it's mocking, this doesn't do that.
The hard vore would have been better if one of the wolves had started happy-fun-rape-time half way through it. But I still liked it Anyway, I hope to see more. You've got quite the variety going.
Twilight got eaten by the snake? No! Twilight is the snake!
That is probably what most of us here would want to happen.
PS: good thing that cupcake didn't hit any landmass or everything on that side of the planet would be dead that very instant, the other half would follow in between an hour to a couple of days. Not to mention that a 75% lightspeed projectile (9mm bullet in this example) would cause so much friction heat that it would ignite the atmosphere and burn every living thing on the surface (and everything at a depth of 35 metres or less under water) of the planet.
PPS: the impact of that cupcake would probably turn just about the entire dragon into a fine red mist as well as leaving a huge crater where he once stood. And thats just from the shockwave of the impact alone.
PPPS: Pinkie Pie is probably more dangerous to everything than any dragon could ever hope to be.
I mean... agh! I know I was reading this because of my morbid curiosity (And because I need to be here to yell at you for killing Octavia, duh ) but this... Ugh. I know it's called morbid curiosity, but that was just... disturbing. (Okay so far it's all disturbing, but this more so.)
Constrict. Pause. Constrict. Pause. Constrict... Twilight’s mind wandered, she already forgot what she was thinking about not ten seconds ago. She hoped the snake was happy with her function, she was doing it the best she could.
Well, at least there's one part of this fic I can get into. That it's the part written by TwistedSpectrum is no surprise.
onloy those who deserve it, only the worst of the worst sinners. and nothing less dude.
i seriously dislike stories like this that totally ignore the character in exchange for things happening. it just makes it alll feel hollow.
Please, please, let Twilight become the snake... I think we'd all love that
I don't get it.
Not a fan of hard vore. Hard digestion, I am though... Weird.
hot and also I second Twilight becoming the snake and then eating Fluttershy in her sleep
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I'm the same way. I really don't care for the gore aspect of "hard vore", but I an oddly turned on by hard digestion/absorption into the host.
I guess it just triggers my TF fetish or something. It's like an inanimate TF, but better in every possible way. You are still technically living, but you become stuck in a helpless form that you can't escape from. Your new form is totally indistinguishable from the rest of the host, and you are forced to settle into your new "life" and live like that... forever
*cackles maniacally*
4324181 not exactly sure on my reason for it... But this chapter hit at least 3 of my fetishes. Wonder what's going happen with mrs. cake now that she felt the pleasure of unbirthing.
Huh... I wonder what would happen if Pinkie ate Mr. Snake now.
Quite liked this chapter, nice and diverse!
Eagerly awaiting the hopeful Princess chapter
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I can't help but feel as though I inspired you with my Apple TF, but that could just be the shameless promotion talking. Either way, I can't fully enjoy this chapter away from home..
Really great job guys, that was hot as fuck, in a "wish I was absorbed into something even though I'd die" kinda way. Just the way I like my vore stories.
Now that 5S is done with, I forsee many transformations/edible ponies on the horizon!
~Dash The Stampede
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aww, i wanted twilight to kick the snake mind out, and take over the snake
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If you got a hard on, in any of what you read, then you got more then you think.
If not, then this isn't for you. (if your under 12, then you haven't developed fetishes yet, come back later)
4326597 Hmm. I see. But I'm ok. I'm already 21 years old.
Please, let Twilight become the snake...
No, I wouldn't, because I'm not a misanthropic jerk.
And I am calling bullshit. The characters aren't in-character and acting like they should, these monsters are just popping up randomly out of nowhere, everyone has suddenly dumped their morals, there's no good explanation for ANY of this...it's just a piece of bullshitake mushrooms that pees all over those that care about the fandom. A waste of time, an insult to the source material, poorly conceived and executed.
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hmm, many votes for this idea. I wonder if it'd be too out of character. I would hate for more people to come to a sexual fetish story and tell me the ponies aren't acting like 8 year old girl cartoon characters.
4327401 We are reading this because we WANT them to get eaten bro. Them being out of character makes it easier to do that. (though i do what to slap fluttershy across the mouth. "Natural order! NATURAL ORDER! WELL THEN BITCH YOU BETTER STOP TAKING CARE OF THEM BECAUSE LAST TIME I CHECKED THE NATURAL ORDER, PONIES WEREN'T NATURES MEDICS YOU HYPERCRITICAL CUNT!")
but yah.
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You can't use the excuse. There's a certain way satire and parody works of you're trying to go for that direction. You have to actually imitate something and then make a point on how dumb it is. If you do a satire, but forget to actually make real points about the thing you're making fun of, you've just mad a bad story...but WORSE.
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And I call bullshit on that too, because you should try and create a realistic setting to get that across, not use contrived horse manure to push the point. And you can't tell me this is "satire". As I schooled Kaiden, satire has to actually imitate something and make a point about the thing it's mocking, this doesn't do that.
The hard vore would have been better if one of the wolves had started happy-fun-rape-time half way through it.
But I still liked it
Anyway, I hope to see more. You've got quite the variety going.
4328600 ok bro, whatever makes you happy. you can go now.
Twilight got eaten by the snake? No! Twilight is the snake!
That is probably what most of us here would want to happen.
PS: good thing that cupcake didn't hit any landmass or everything on that side of the planet would be dead that very instant, the other half would follow in between an hour to a couple of days. Not to mention that a 75% lightspeed projectile (9mm bullet in this example) would cause so much friction heat that it would ignite the atmosphere and burn every living thing on the surface (and everything at a depth of 35 metres or less under water) of the planet.
PPS: the impact of that cupcake would probably turn just about the entire dragon into a fine red mist as well as leaving a huge crater where he once stood. And thats just from the shockwave of the impact alone.
PPPS: Pinkie Pie is probably more dangerous to everything than any dragon could ever hope to be.
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Pinkie would become the God Emperor of Dune...
I... what... is... huh? I can't even!
I mean... agh! I know I was reading this because of my morbid curiosity (And because I need to be here to yell at you for killing Octavia, duh ) but this... Ugh. I know it's called morbid curiosity, but that was just... disturbing. (Okay so far it's all disturbing, but this more so.)
Pinkie pie Reminds me of a certain super mutant...
4326597 I'm 10, and I developed fetishes.
Oh sweet Celestia, not this again...
my dick could break brick walls
I was hoping for twilinaga
Well, at least there's one part of this fic I can get into. That it's the part written by TwistedSpectrum is no surprise.
lol so random. the unbirht part was most funny
does Kaidan believe in advertisements? because putting the kinks in the description makes it a thousand times easier to search for.