After years of hard work and stress psychologist Mind Warp has decided to leave Canterlot and go live with his daughter and granddaughter in Ponyville. Little does he know about the residents of the town and their eccentric behavior.
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well, two things I noticed
I'd say there it'd flow better if it was 'ask him that yourself'. From how you're writing it you're showing Ditzy is intelligent, which i feel can be somewhat rare, but it's a good thing.
the other
Good for you, i'm guessing you meant.
It's funny how we can never catch our own mistakes, but others mistakes we see plain as day.