• Published 24th Oct 2013
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the Grayscale Factory - Facade



Trixie tries to find a way to better herself after the events of "Magic duel". She's recruited into a... special publishing company. But when a string of disappearances leads her to a lone factory, what horrors will she find inside?

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Comments ( 6 )

You need a pre-reader and editor. I'd be happy to oblige on both parts!

3408390
I'll be happy to take you up on that offer (like I said, this is a special one).

About my grammar... I've gotten comments saying it needs heavy work, some saying that it's pretty damn good, and I recently checked it on a legit grammar site and the only mistakes were misspellings (everypony, nopony, etc.) and a little redundancy... Now I'm legitimately confused :fluttershbad:.

3408988 As long as you use GDocs, I'd love to help. You know my email, right?

3409244
did you post it in the thread?

3409258 I think so. Let me check...

...no. I'll PM it to you.

You should also try a soap factory. Soap is made up of 0.13% lye of how much fat, 0.38% water of how much fat. just ask me if you want me to tell you how to make soap.:twilightsmile:

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