Princess Twilight has just gotten back from a mysterious journey through an enchanted mirror, and poor Twilight, has no time to rest. However, an anonymous mare has sent a threat to Canterlot and all of Equestria. Twilight and her friends must set out on a journey through land that has been forgotten to go seek the one and only platinum crown in all of Equestria. Throughout their challenging journey, will they separate? Will their needs form in front of their friendship? or will they somehow learn to fight against what you want, to keep your friends close.
(unfinished, but getting there ;) )
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I like this so far. I think this is a solid plot and you can do a lot of things with it. There are a few grammatical errors in there, but forgetting that it's a solid story so far. Even so, it seemed like you were starting to run out of steam towards the end: the last paragraph seems a bit weak to me.
3495243 okie dokie lokie! I'll try to work on that. Thank you! I am trying to work on the next chapter, so thank you for your feedback!
So far So Good! Can't wait for the next parts of the story to release!