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This is the First Fanfiction I have created, criticism & corrections are welcome.

[Little to Huge cursing]
Discord has broken out of the statue & is creating havoc all over Canterlot. A group of humans are called upon by Princess Celestia, in their dreams, to help fight Discord & his band of humans hybrids. One day, they're called upon by Celestia & are transported to Equestria, via a portal, created by Twilight. However, Discord overhears what is happening & attempts to destroy the portal. However, his attempt fails & the humans are transported to different places of Equestria. Soon after, the Main Six are called upon to retrieve the humans.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 2 )

great concept, but it was a bit of a drag to follow at times. run on sentences are everywhere here. other than that it wasnt a bad read

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Thanks, i kinda got a bit impatient with myself writing the prologue
I'll try to edit it later on

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