Big Mac discovers that, when he's wearing his new horse collar, he makes fillies that touch him feel good. Real good. Sadly, this isn't as amazing as it sounds.
Yeesh... The purple one is awfully totalitarian and biased in her views (Where does she get off - calling him the rapist after physically coercing him?) ... The pink one is emotionally stunted and lacking in basic social grace... The yellow one is a pitiful creature lacking drive and feeling a baseless sense of self-pity... And the white one is dubious to begin with... ... Women...
Anyways, nice to see you keep churning these chapters out like this, though I'm beginning to feel more inclined, as time goes on, to side with the red one who can't be biased due to the fact that he is the variable control to the whole formula, if you will...
- Bossy - Obsessed only with fun, and doesn't care or realize that she's making ponies uncomfortable. - Dangerously spineless, with no self-esteem. - Dubious.
I was trying to stay true to the characters and I guess I might be succeeding?
Yeesh... The purple one is awfully totalitarian and biased in her views (Where does she get off - calling him the rapist after physically coercing him?) ... The pink one is emotionally stunted and lacking in basic social grace... The yellow one is a pitiful creature lacking drive and feeling a baseless sense of self-pity... And the white one is dubious to begin with...
... Women...
And this is what we call quality characterization.
3130596 Rainbow is blunt and takes things literally. She also doesn't have a lot of patience for Fluttershy's whining. Halfway through Twilight's tortured explanation of why it's the same as rape she'd tune out.
Also, it wasn't rape. Among other things, he stopped when she asked.
Ok twilight the hypocrite is getting on my nerves. I'm with pinkie on this he didn't rape her. This could be the equivalent of kissing and heavy petting then the girl pulling away and saying no and the guy stops. I won't say that Big Mac is blameless, because he did have a stupid plan. But it looks like he wasn't gonna go through with it until the accidental first touch. All I'm saying is that there is a lot of mistakes happening and there is no communication between the the two who should be communicating. But seriously, fluttershy needs to Mare up and make a decision for herself I really hope dash can knock some sinse in all of them. But I love the story and it is good just a little bit frustrating. Mabe a look into equestrian law for what is constituted as rape when magic is involved would help.
5119902 3135739 3131801 3132058 3131960 3131567 3131446 am I really the only one who thought it was obvious that Twilight's little rant was really aimed at her own guilt and self loathing, over both her fantasies and what she did to him.
No, I made it halfway through this chapter, but I'm going to have to stop there. There's no trope I hate more than The Big Misunderstanding, and while this story doesn't quite fit that description, it's in the ballpark. The story is well-written and everything, though. The problem lies in my personal taste.
Applejack couldn't be aware of what Twilight did to Big Mac, so Pinkie didn't know either. If Pinkie knew, Twilight wondered, would she be as quick to defend Twilight's actions as she was to defend Big Mac's actions?
Hmm... something tells me this is a case of not only hatred at herself, but foreshadowing. Look back at the last line of the chapter. Hint:
Yeesh...
The purple one is awfully totalitarian and biased in her views (Where does she get off - calling him the rapist after physically coercing him?) ...
The pink one is emotionally stunted and lacking in basic social grace...
The yellow one is a pitiful creature lacking drive and feeling a baseless sense of self-pity...
And the white one is dubious to begin with...
... Women...
Anyways, nice to see you keep churning these chapters out like this, though I'm beginning to feel more inclined, as time goes on, to side with the red one who can't be biased due to the fact that he is the variable control to the whole formula, if you will...
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Hm so to paraphrase..
- Bossy
- Obsessed only with fun, and doesn't care or realize that she's making ponies uncomfortable.
- Dangerously spineless, with no self-esteem.
- Dubious.
I was trying to stay true to the characters and I guess I might be succeeding?
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And this is what we call quality characterization.
Keep up the good work author person!
3130596 Rainbow is blunt and takes things literally. She also doesn't have a lot of patience for Fluttershy's whining. Halfway through Twilight's tortured explanation of why it's the same as rape she'd tune out.
Also, it wasn't rape. Among other things, he stopped when she asked.
Mac is being railroaded by Twilight, what a horny bitch!
Ok twilight the hypocrite is getting on my nerves. I'm with pinkie on this he didn't rape her. This could be the equivalent of kissing and heavy petting then the girl pulling away and saying no and the guy stops. I won't say that Big Mac is blameless, because he did have a stupid plan. But it looks like he wasn't gonna go through with it until the accidental first touch. All I'm saying is that there is a lot of mistakes happening and there is no communication between the the two who should be communicating. But seriously, fluttershy needs to Mare up and make a decision for herself I really hope dash can knock some sinse in all of them. But I love the story and it is good just a little bit frustrating. Mabe a look into equestrian law for what is constituted as rape when magic is involved would help.
Twilight... You really know NOTHING
This is a good story. Waiting for the next chapter.
OK, girls, when Pinkie Pie is the sane one, you're doing something WRONG.
Worst thing is, I know of real people who think just like Twilight when this subject comes up.
3131801says the guy with a dat flank pic
pinkie pie messed everything up!!!!
This fic has done the one thing that even ax-crazy gorefics haven't been able to do.
Hate Twilight.
Bravo, you've made me angry at Best Pony.
I'm feeling kinda bad for Mac. They're all misunderstanding him... Poor sucker...
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am I really the only one who thought it was obvious that Twilight's little rant was really aimed at her own guilt and self loathing, over both her fantasies and what she did to him.
No, I made it halfway through this chapter, but I'm going to have to stop there. There's no trope I hate more than The Big Misunderstanding, and while this story doesn't quite fit that description, it's in the ballpark. The story is well-written and everything, though. The problem lies in my personal taste.
Hmm... something tells me this is a case of not only hatred at herself, but foreshadowing. Look back at the last line of the chapter. Hint: